Reminiscing
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Chapter 1 Eleanor"A collection of short stories
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I was allergic and couldn't have animals but that was me having a discussion with someone. At an early age I could hold my own in a conversation. Eleanor is going to be fun to have around.:-)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I was allergic and couldn't have animals but that was me having a discussion with someone. At an early age I could hold my own in a conversation. Eleanor is going to be fun to have around.:-)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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My line for Eleanor is she is a 'hot mess.' She doe have her daddy wrapped around her finger, she's a daddy's girl. But I'm pretty sure Andrew won't give in on this one. He's pretty stubborn. Both parents have commented that Eleanor takes afte her grandma. Hmm. Thank you for the kind support.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Barbara. I hope you are well
Another Eleanor, no relation to the Eleanor in your other book, the ghost?
Pardon me if I get the names mixed up I'm sorry
This was a cute chapter. Looks like the kids succeeded in getting a dog even though the dad didn't want them to. Sounds like the mom did.
How old is Eleanor in this? It sounds like both girls are pretty cute.
I look forward to more
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hi, Barbara. I hope you are well
Another Eleanor, no relation to the Eleanor in your other book, the ghost?
Pardon me if I get the names mixed up I'm sorry
This was a cute chapter. Looks like the kids succeeded in getting a dog even though the dad didn't want them to. Sounds like the mom did.
How old is Eleanor in this? It sounds like both girls are pretty cute.
I look forward to more
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Begin Again has the Eleanor in her novel, not me. Eleanor just turned four, Monday. They don't have a dog, yet. I doubt Andrew will give in on this one. Thank you for the support.
Comment from jim vecchio
Before her death, my wife and I adopted a dog not too long after her birth. We named her Angelina, after my mother. She looked a lot like the dog in the picture. She had the most beautiful blue eyes. Now, I like to leave treats for the visiting dogs at our assisted living center.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Before her death, my wife and I adopted a dog not too long after her birth. We named her Angelina, after my mother. She looked a lot like the dog in the picture. She had the most beautiful blue eyes. Now, I like to leave treats for the visiting dogs at our assisted living center.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the support. As you know I have a dog in all my stories.
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If you ever need any virtual dog food, let me know.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Yes, I think Andrew was holding out as long as he could but the writing was on the wall. And you just put it into words. As ever, your excellent dialogue carries the story and is a joy to read. Well done, Barbara. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Yes, I think Andrew was holding out as long as he could but the writing was on the wall. And you just put it into words. As ever, your excellent dialogue carries the story and is a joy to read. Well done, Barbara. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the support. I doubt Andrew will give in on this one. LOL
Comment from jessizero
This was sweet, innocent, and very amusing. I think it was the perfect way to start this project. I especially liked "maybe our neighbors like dog poop." LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This was sweet, innocent, and very amusing. I think it was the perfect way to start this project. I especially liked "maybe our neighbors like dog poop." LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the support.
Comment from nomi338
Your son may be getting his first lesson in the unforgettable fact that girls, determined to get their way girls, are difficult to argue with or reason with, in an, "I will not be denied what I really, really want." Discussion.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Your son may be getting his first lesson in the unforgettable fact that girls, determined to get their way girls, are difficult to argue with or reason with, in an, "I will not be denied what I really, really want." Discussion.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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LOL So true. He only had brothers. I was the only female in the house. LOL I took being a princess to the extreme. LOL Thank you for the support.
Comment from Begin Again
Okay, my heart fell off my sleeve and rolled right into your story with Eleanor. How could it get any cuter! Dogs and grandchildren the best gifts in life!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Okay, my heart fell off my sleeve and rolled right into your story with Eleanor. How could it get any cuter! Dogs and grandchildren the best gifts in life!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the support. I love being a grandmother.
Comment from royowen
We've always owned dogs, and our girls love them but I don't think they're loved by their hubbies, except the pleading of our granddaughter changed Teddy's mind, (my younger daughter's hubby) and now they own a large female Rottweiler, which we dogsit three days a week, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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We've always owned dogs, and our girls love them but I don't think they're loved by their hubbies, except the pleading of our granddaughter changed Teddy's mind, (my younger daughter's hubby) and now they own a large female Rottweiler, which we dogsit three days a week, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the support. I know you understand the power daughter have over their dads.
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Absolutely, and granddaughters
Comment from LJbutterfly
I agree with Eleanor. Dogs are great fun and make good companions, but require lots of time training and the expense of food and routine vet visits. This is such a cute story. Let us know if Andrew finally gives in and gets a dog.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I agree with Eleanor. Dogs are great fun and make good companions, but require lots of time training and the expense of food and routine vet visits. This is such a cute story. Let us know if Andrew finally gives in and gets a dog.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I sure will. Andrew grew up with dogs. LOL Thank you for the support.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Hey Barbara, this is such a very nice story that speaks of several things. When I write, and I don't do it real often to be honest, I like to know what my readers pickup from what I'm laying down. I love the interaction between father and daughter. Dad's affirming his daughter in what she observes concerning the niceness of the dog and yet he holds his ground concerning the acquisition of a dog. I love how Andrew is man enough and wise enough to not only allow Eleanor to have a conversation but willing to let her make her points in the process of constructing her argument for a dog. I also love how wise Eleanor, at her tender age, is and how she incorporated Charlotte into the negotiation. Then Barbara, Grandma comes in and takes up for the lifestyle called: "Its a dogs life".
Don't tell him, but I think Andrew was mistaken this time. I think you were helping. I think you were helping Eleanor and Charlotte. I know, that's what grandmas do. Thanks for sharing the beautiful story.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Hey Barbara, this is such a very nice story that speaks of several things. When I write, and I don't do it real often to be honest, I like to know what my readers pickup from what I'm laying down. I love the interaction between father and daughter. Dad's affirming his daughter in what she observes concerning the niceness of the dog and yet he holds his ground concerning the acquisition of a dog. I love how Andrew is man enough and wise enough to not only allow Eleanor to have a conversation but willing to let her make her points in the process of constructing her argument for a dog. I also love how wise Eleanor, at her tender age, is and how she incorporated Charlotte into the negotiation. Then Barbara, Grandma comes in and takes up for the lifestyle called: "Its a dogs life".
Don't tell him, but I think Andrew was mistaken this time. I think you were helping. I think you were helping Eleanor and Charlotte. I know, that's what grandmas do. Thanks for sharing the beautiful story.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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As an early childhood expert, myself, I was amazed at Eleanor's reasoning skills, at such a young age. But when I think about who her parents are, I'm not really surprised. They're both very intelligent and allow both girls to think and present their opinions, as long as they're respectful.
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Great concept and you're welcome for the review Barbara.
