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Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is such a funny story. Good luck in the contest you two! I think your sentence was inadvertently cut off here though: way out, t it can be found at the very top of the post. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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This is such a funny story. Good luck in the contest you two! I think your sentence was inadvertently cut off here though: way out, t it can be found at the very top of the post. Happy writing!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Lindsey. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Gretchen!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your post and your take on the events found within.
Love that although you are not a floral aficionado, you know bugs! I, on the other hand, know my flowers, AND those darn bugs know me! I swear they think I'm dessert after flitting from flower to flower in our gardens!
Just imagining both you and Rachelle running made me day!
Thank you for sharing!
Ready for the next chapter, lady!
fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Hello, Gretchen!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your post and your take on the events found within.
Love that although you are not a floral aficionado, you know bugs! I, on the other hand, know my flowers, AND those darn bugs know me! I swear they think I'm dessert after flitting from flower to flower in our gardens!
Just imagining both you and Rachelle running made me day!
Thank you for sharing!
Ready for the next chapter, lady!
fondly,
diane
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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The running was purely fiction. I would either fall or give up. Lol. Thank you so much for the awesome review and extra star. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this addition with us. Yes, rattlesnakes bites are a real thing and can be dangerous. I enjoyed reading. I had a feeling a snake is what spooked the horse.
They pretty laid back around here." (They're)
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this addition with us. Yes, rattlesnakes bites are a real thing and can be dangerous. I enjoyed reading. I had a feeling a snake is what spooked the horse.
They pretty laid back around here." (They're)
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Barbara. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you again for the edits. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Wonder what the Amish thought of a woman more interested in photographing a snake than the emergency all about her? Hmmm.
Good thing you control the fiction, they might've spit into your cereal.
(laughy face here)
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Wonder what the Amish thought of a woman more interested in photographing a snake than the emergency all about her? Hmmm.
Good thing you control the fiction, they might've spit into your cereal.
(laughy face here)
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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There will be plenty of chances for spitting in my cereal. Lol. I have a delayed sense of urgency. Thank you, Wayne, for your humorous review. Gretchen