Flowers
A ode poem 5-7-529 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I agree with your words. That's Mr. I love flowers. I always love when spring comes. Everything comes to life. I'm learning to how to wrote poems. I enjoyed your poem. Very good job
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I agree with your words. That's Mr. I love flowers. I always love when spring comes. Everything comes to life. I'm learning to how to wrote poems. I enjoyed your poem. Very good job
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Ode 5-7-5 writing prompt. I love having fresh cut flowers around the house most of the summer but once Fall arrives I love having pumpkins, small squash and tiny gourds setting inside and out. Nature is a beautiful accent year round. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the Ode 5-7-5 writing prompt. I love having fresh cut flowers around the house most of the summer but once Fall arrives I love having pumpkins, small squash and tiny gourds setting inside and out. Nature is a beautiful accent year round. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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That sounds very fine. Thank you for the kind review. Thank you for reading. Much love, Sam
Comment from Jennifer Keeley
I like this! There was a hidden part (sad or gloom), but it's taken away by the flowers. You had a very creative approach and the syllable count was correct. It was an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I like this! There was a hidden part (sad or gloom), but it's taken away by the flowers. You had a very creative approach and the syllable count was correct. It was an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from pome lover
You did just fine. A lovely 5-7-5 which probably is understood and appreciated by a lot of fed up people, today. Flowers and beautiful music, for me, and birds.
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Katharine
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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You did just fine. A lovely 5-7-5 which probably is understood and appreciated by a lot of fed up people, today. Flowers and beautiful music, for me, and birds.
Fan Story has a lot of friendly members, as you are probably finding out, from all over everywhere. Have fun!
Katharine
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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There are some very nice folks on Fanstory and amazing writers. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Samantha,
It it good to have nature as a coping mechanism. So much beauty and serenity can be found there. From your picture I would say animals are another of your coping mechanisms.
Congrats on placing second in the prompt.
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hi Samantha,
It it good to have nature as a coping mechanism. So much beauty and serenity can be found there. From your picture I would say animals are another of your coping mechanisms.
Congrats on placing second in the prompt.
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the kind words v
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You are most kindly welcome, Samantha.
Joan
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Your welcome
Comment from Katiemae1977
Why on earth did someone give you a 4 star rating? This is the best of the bunch and got my vote
Flowers are indeed a contrast to a world in upheaval. Nice use of the 5-7-5 form.
Best wishes!
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Why on earth did someone give you a 4 star rating? This is the best of the bunch and got my vote
Flowers are indeed a contrast to a world in upheaval. Nice use of the 5-7-5 form.
Best wishes!
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. I love the fact that flowers are your coping mechanism. They are my mom's as well. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. I love the fact that flowers are your coping mechanism. They are my mom's as well. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and the kind words.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes how summer
flowers are meaningful to you.
-They help you cope in the midst
of a "broken world."
-I think a lot of us find ways to
cope since the world doesn't make it easy.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes how summer
flowers are meaningful to you.
-They help you cope in the midst
of a "broken world."
-I think a lot of us find ways to
cope since the world doesn't make it easy.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much
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You are very welcome.
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Everything is good except line one should be Summer flowers are
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I re-wrote the review for you. Good job with the poem.
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Thank you so much
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You are very welcome.
Comment from RodG
I like your ode to summer flowers. Indeed, they will help anyone who is having a bad day cope better. As for your form, you need to revise lines 1 & 2 which have too many syllables and add a syllable to line 3.
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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I like your ode to summer flowers. Indeed, they will help anyone who is having a bad day cope better. As for your form, you need to revise lines 1 & 2 which have too many syllables and add a syllable to line 3.
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you