Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Morning Sunshine"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Mr Lemon face is rather a sour character and a rule follower, I loved your descriptions. And Dougie has finally made contact as if nothing has happened. Glad you have returned to your faithful story and I shall look forward to reading more Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Mr Lemon face is rather a sour character and a rule follower, I loved your descriptions. And Dougie has finally made contact as if nothing has happened. Glad you have returned to your faithful story and I shall look forward to reading more Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you. Took me a while to reconnect with my feisty friend but she is back. I appreciate this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Oh the goosebumps! That means this deserves a six and I haven't got any left! What a story. The lemon faced teacher. Now this phone call. I do like Miranda. Straightforward and take no "smart Alec" behaviour either from the teacher or from Dougie. Keep them coming! Well done. You know how to engage your readers.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Oh the goosebumps! That means this deserves a six and I haven't got any left! What a story. The lemon faced teacher. Now this phone call. I do like Miranda. Straightforward and take no "smart Alec" behaviour either from the teacher or from Dougie. Keep them coming! Well done. You know how to engage your readers.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. This makes me so happy. I love this character, I'm so glad you enjoy her too. You've made my day! Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hey Gretchen,
sounds like Miranda's life is going to get a lot more complicated. Too bad there wasn't a puddle in front of Mr. Pleasant when she pulled in to drop of Waylon. I have a feeling he's not going to remain so smug. Another interesting story gal. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hey Gretchen,
sounds like Miranda's life is going to get a lot more complicated. Too bad there wasn't a puddle in front of Mr. Pleasant when she pulled in to drop of Waylon. I have a feeling he's not going to remain so smug. Another interesting story gal. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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You may be right, Tom. Thank you so much fir this. Glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing does a great job of sharing Miranda's struggles and emotions. I was drawn readers into her world. The blend of tension in her encounter with the grumpy teacher and the surprise reappearance of Dougie keeps the story so interesting. Great job again!
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Your writing does a great job of sharing Miranda's struggles and emotions. I was drawn readers into her world. The blend of tension in her encounter with the grumpy teacher and the surprise reappearance of Dougie keeps the story so interesting. Great job again!
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written and very compassionate story that you're telling here and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially wish you a very very good evening. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This is a beautifully written and very compassionate story that you're telling here and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially wish you a very very good evening. Patricia.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia. Gretchen