A Healing Rain
The sad account of my wife's death50 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem is personal and very dear to your heart.
In writing such a poem, you smile and grieve until you finish it.
Your picture, colors, and font are nice as well as your couplets.
Congratulations on being Recognized and good luck with it.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Your poem is personal and very dear to your heart.
In writing such a poem, you smile and grieve until you finish it.
Your picture, colors, and font are nice as well as your couplets.
Congratulations on being Recognized and good luck with it.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your very kind comments.
Comment from Harry Craft
Oh Nomi. I am so sorry for your loss. The fact that you had the strength to write about the death of your beloved wife Yvonne surely commends six stars. Such a sad but very powerful poem. Bless you this day and everyday Nomi. Great work!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Oh Nomi. I am so sorry for your loss. The fact that you had the strength to write about the death of your beloved wife Yvonne surely commends six stars. Such a sad but very powerful poem. Bless you this day and everyday Nomi. Great work!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Harry. Please know and be assured, your kindness will long be remembered and appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
I am so sorry for your loss. Your poem is a beautiful love story and a sad tale of a great loss. I know you will be reunited someday. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I am so sorry for your loss. Your poem is a beautiful love story and a sad tale of a great loss. I know you will be reunited someday. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you so, so much.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I have been married over fifty years, and cannot not begin to imagine the pain you feel. The heartfelt words of your poem, filled with raw, sincere emotion brought tears to my eyes. Since death is a part of life, God has His loving arms wrapped tightly around you, knowing how difficult it is when He calls one of His children home. God has left you with the gift of memory.
As you grieve, beautiful memories of Yvonne will remain until the pain, with the help of God, friends and family, is replaced with acceptance, which means you gradually re-engage with life while you miss Yvonne and grieve her home-going. God will be with you every step of the way.
I am so sorry Yvonne is no longer physically with you, but her spirit will be with you forever. I pray for your strength.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I have been married over fifty years, and cannot not begin to imagine the pain you feel. The heartfelt words of your poem, filled with raw, sincere emotion brought tears to my eyes. Since death is a part of life, God has His loving arms wrapped tightly around you, knowing how difficult it is when He calls one of His children home. God has left you with the gift of memory.
As you grieve, beautiful memories of Yvonne will remain until the pain, with the help of God, friends and family, is replaced with acceptance, which means you gradually re-engage with life while you miss Yvonne and grieve her home-going. God will be with you every step of the way.
I am so sorry Yvonne is no longer physically with you, but her spirit will be with you forever. I pray for your strength.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you from the very depths of my soul. My heart overflows with gratitude.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Nolan,
Your exceptional poem is heartfelt. Losing someone that close is heartbreaking. (My dad lost my mom after 64 years of marriage) He was devastated too. He found joy in his grandchildren and great-grandchildren then.
My mother had dementia; I'm afraid one day I will get that too.
Your poignant photo and words are uplifting. Never doubt that you will be with your loved one again!
Best wishes, Nolan.
Cindy
I wanted to write a poem for you like other Fanstorians did.
I read most of them and knew I could not write one as elegant as they.
Prayers.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Nolan,
Your exceptional poem is heartfelt. Losing someone that close is heartbreaking. (My dad lost my mom after 64 years of marriage) He was devastated too. He found joy in his grandchildren and great-grandchildren then.
My mother had dementia; I'm afraid one day I will get that too.
Your poignant photo and words are uplifting. Never doubt that you will be with your loved one again!
Best wishes, Nolan.
Cindy
I wanted to write a poem for you like other Fanstorians did.
I read most of them and knew I could not write one as elegant as they.
Prayers.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Please know that whatever you want to express will not be judged by some superficial standard, but will be accepted based on sincerity.
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Thank you, Nolan. I just posted one for you and your dear Yvonne. Best wishes, and Blessings.
Cindy
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Awesome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a loving memorial and elegy poem to your wife of 51 years. We have been married for 42 years so I can relate to this poem, and feel your pain and your lost.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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a loving memorial and elegy poem to your wife of 51 years. We have been married for 42 years so I can relate to this poem, and feel your pain and your lost.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Jake, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Nolan,
My sincere condolences to you and your family on this sad occasion.
Fifty One years, what a magnificent marriage. I'm sure you will once again
meet Yvonne and she'll say, "I've been waiting for you, Nolan."
You'll both smile and embrace an eternity of love.
Beautiful poem in her honor, a true poet, my friend.
Best wishes to you and your family.
Six stars to light her way and shine forever.
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hello Nolan,
My sincere condolences to you and your family on this sad occasion.
Fifty One years, what a magnificent marriage. I'm sure you will once again
meet Yvonne and she'll say, "I've been waiting for you, Nolan."
You'll both smile and embrace an eternity of love.
Beautiful poem in her honor, a true poet, my friend.
Best wishes to you and your family.
Six stars to light her way and shine forever.
Robert
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Robert. I am deeply indebted to you for penning such a nice response. You are deeply respected and appreciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Nolan
This is a poignant poem about your loss and grief. You will get through it with the help of you friends and God. Sorry for your loss.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Enjoy the day as best you can.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Nolan
This is a poignant poem about your loss and grief. You will get through it with the help of you friends and God. Sorry for your loss.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Enjoy the day as best you can.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Joan, I truly appreciate your kind expressions.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I am so sorry for your loss. My prayers are with you and your family. I pray God will give you courage and strength to continue on. I could feel your pain throughout your poem. Take care.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I am so sorry for your loss. My prayers are with you and your family. I pray God will give you courage and strength to continue on. I could feel your pain throughout your poem. Take care.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Brenda, Your kind words give me comfort.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Amazing to feel so much and get it down so beautifully, Nomi. You are going through so much and I hate so badly to see you hurting so.
Your poem was full of such love for Yvonne and shows the reason why you made it to 51 years in your marriage.
Yes, you will be together again, but in the mean time may your family flourish you with love and honor, may you feel her in many sunrises and sunsets and like I said in my poem, may you see her in that butterfly that lands by your side. God puts those there for you to relate more to the beauty of her part of the ONE that she wants you to continue seeing. Her spirit she left behind for you.
God bless you, Nomi and I hope you smile again soon. Remember it is not a bad thing, but you will honor her when you do so as she will know that she really did make a difference in your heart.
Lotsa love and prayers for you, big brother. And some big Hugs too.... Debi
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Amazing to feel so much and get it down so beautifully, Nomi. You are going through so much and I hate so badly to see you hurting so.
Your poem was full of such love for Yvonne and shows the reason why you made it to 51 years in your marriage.
Yes, you will be together again, but in the mean time may your family flourish you with love and honor, may you feel her in many sunrises and sunsets and like I said in my poem, may you see her in that butterfly that lands by your side. God puts those there for you to relate more to the beauty of her part of the ONE that she wants you to continue seeing. Her spirit she left behind for you.
God bless you, Nomi and I hope you smile again soon. Remember it is not a bad thing, but you will honor her when you do so as she will know that she really did make a difference in your heart.
Lotsa love and prayers for you, big brother. And some big Hugs too.... Debi
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you. It is dear friends like you that keep me from feeling sad or down hearted. I love and appreciate you so much.