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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from
Lindsey Russell
I can't wait to finish this story. It's so good and it is unique from all the other stories I've read. I hope the story has a happy ending. Good luck with it and happy writing!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from
Ric Myworld
I like every chapter but this one has a special way of drawing me in even further to the what-ifs as things continue to move forward. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from
davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
This is a very interesting chapter where you delve deeper into the relationship between Noah and Sami, and where you introduce a relationship and child between two people who were related to the house they are living in.
I figure you have something up with Amber and Jesse and the baby girl who was born to them. It was a sad story, but life tends to be full of such.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
Thank you for the kind review.
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