Show off Witch
Gets cut off in traffic35 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! Definitely the season for witches and limericks! The visual is superb and you complement it well with your delightfully fluent and humorous verse. Well done and good luck:) Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Haha! Definitely the season for witches and limericks! The visual is superb and you complement it well with your delightfully fluent and humorous verse. Well done and good luck:) Debbie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Debbie, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, mystery poet, this limerick is perfect in 8, 8, 5, 5, 8 syllable count.
I wish I had a six
for the show-off witch!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Oh, mystery poet, this limerick is perfect in 8, 8, 5, 5, 8 syllable count.
I wish I had a six
for the show-off witch!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Funny story. Showing off in any situation works poorly. The last line makes the story as it should in a Limerick. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Funny story. Showing off in any situation works poorly. The last line makes the story as it should in a Limerick. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Robert I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
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you're welcome
Comment from Begin Again
There's a bully in every crowd it seems like these days ...even when riding broomsticks. Cute and made me smile! Thanks for sharing your limerick. They've caught on like wild fire lately.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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There's a bully in every crowd it seems like these days ...even when riding broomsticks. Cute and made me smile! Thanks for sharing your limerick. They've caught on like wild fire lately.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Carol, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a cute limerick which shows that you get what you give. Karma happens. Nice artwork to go with the words. It seems the poem is inspired by the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful day.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi
This is a cute limerick which shows that you get what you give. Karma happens. Nice artwork to go with the words. It seems the poem is inspired by the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful day.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Joan, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
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You are most kindly welcome on all accounts.
Joan
Hey Just to let you know I have just published a book called "The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry)" by Joan Pechter. It is available on Amazon.com.
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I already own it
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a good limerick with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of Mick in the beginning.
-It seems like she shouldn't have "slowed down,"
but didn't know what the result would be.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a good limerick with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of Mick in the beginning.
-It seems like she shouldn't have "slowed down,"
but didn't know what the result would be.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Pam, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
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Hi Pam, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
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You are very welcome and I appreciate your reply and your fun Halloween limerick.
Comment from Sanku
The witch on a broom stick is a funny image The foolish witch was knocked off by a hag .ha ha . She deserved it ..This is an interesting limerick.. all the best for the contest...
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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The witch on a broom stick is a funny image The foolish witch was knocked off by a hag .ha ha . She deserved it ..This is an interesting limerick.. all the best for the contest...
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Santha, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet,
The artwork with the comment made me laugh. And your wee poem was a fun read. I like the rhyming words for the three longer lines.
For this contest, the author demands a specific syllable count which I see you provided. (8,8,5,5,8,)
I read that a limerick usually has 7-10 syllables in lines 1,2,5, and 5-7 syllables in lines 3,4.
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Ciao mystery poet,
The artwork with the comment made me laugh. And your wee poem was a fun read. I like the rhyming words for the three longer lines.
For this contest, the author demands a specific syllable count which I see you provided. (8,8,5,5,8,)
I read that a limerick usually has 7-10 syllables in lines 1,2,5, and 5-7 syllables in lines 3,4.
Best of luck!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Tempeste, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very funny innocent Limerick with great metre and rhymes and I enjoyed this story too, a fine Limerick for the contest, I enjoyed the ride on this broomstick, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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This is a very funny innocent Limerick with great metre and rhymes and I enjoyed this story too, a fine Limerick for the contest, I enjoyed the ride on this broomstick, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Dolly, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from talented150
That was a very fun limerick. I liked it very much. It was very clever. I wasn't sure what kind of a poem it would be when I clicked on it, but I was totally delighted to read it. Job well-done.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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That was a very fun limerick. I liked it very much. It was very clever. I wasn't sure what kind of a poem it would be when I clicked on it, but I was totally delighted to read it. Job well-done.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi there, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.