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Our Rhonda Rose of Texas

For Davisr Rhonda ~ a two rhymed modified Quatern

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Comment from Carol Clark2
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A cute poem for Rhonda's birthday. I'm glad she and Wayne are still together to celebrate her special day. You said it well in the final stanza. God has been good to them. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Carol, I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her. This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
reply by Carol Clark2 on 05-Nov-2024
    I'm sure she loved your poem. I hope it brightened her day.
Comment from Sally Law
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Ah, thank you for this beautiful rhyming poem for our Rhonda! And thank you for making it from everyone! Count me in! The YouTube selections are great and will surely bless her.

Rhonda dear, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! You are so loved on FanStory and we just hope you know that, on your birthday and always. God bless you with every good gift from above. James 1.
Love & Blessings to you both!
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Dearest Sally, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks for the gracious six stars and the kind comments, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Tim Margetts
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I love the fun vibe and humour in this Birthday greeting. I try, when I can to write small poems for my family and friends on their birthdays. I think the personal touch is so much more than the simple Have a happy Birthday or generic card we all send.

Tim

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Tim, I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her. This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
reply by Tim Margetts on 04-Nov-2024
    Yes I did notice the references and they are all good song choices.
    Tim
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written tribute for Rhonda
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like your reference to the "yellow rose."
-It was also special that you ran into Pat Boone.
-A very good concluding verse.
Happy Birthday, Rhonda, have a great day!!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Pam, hey, I have been meaning to ask you if that is a picture of you and your husband or just a classic picture? It is so cool.

    And you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.
    Oh yeah, I see Pat Boone from time to time, LOL.

    This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Nov-2024
    No, the picture is one I created from a prompt. I like it a lot and decided to keep it instead of changing it like I was doing.

    I think it was good that you did "funny and different. I'm sure Rhonda appreciated it, as well as the songs and videos. You did a really good job! Have a great day and rest of your week.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Oh my gosh, Debi, I didn't just tear up, I have tears rolling down my cheeks!!!!! You are so precious.

Wayne is here beside me in the hospital bed, worried he's ruining my birthday. I told him if things had been different, it would have, but he survived and is mostly well. That's a true birthday gift.

And now, this sweet poem with the music is so, so, kind!!!

Thank you from the bottom of my yellow rose heart!!! You've brought brightness to this day. Tears are still flowing!!!!!

Oh, and I love Martin Short!!!

You have no idea how much I needed this!!!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Well your birthday is not over yet and it may be warm in Texas but it is going to get hot when you get your next gift from me. So check your messenger.
    Hope you have had a great day! And thank you for liking your gifts so far.
    Love ya much, Debi
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 05-Nov-2024
    Debi, you absolutely made my birthday a fun and uplifting experience. From midnight until bedtime, I had gifts waiting.
    Thank you so much,
    Love and hugs,
    Rhonda
Comment from Nicki.B
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Big Happy Birthday to you Rhonda! It's been a bit of a whirlwind of late, to say the least! Thankfully Wayne is doing much better and you can both enjoy your birthday!
Debi this is beautiful, your birthday wishes are always so gracefully put together and such a joy to read. Keep your special tributes coming, they make everyone feel fabulous!
Best Wishes
Nicki xoxox

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Nicki, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friends. Love, Debi
reply by Nicki.B on 04-Nov-2024
    That was brilliant Debi, I don't even know why I didn't mention because something funny happened when I read your poem I pressed play on all at the same time, don't ask me how lol! And all clips were playing away it was a crazy show haha! Well done x
Comment from Jacob1395
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I hope Rhonda has a brilliant birthday. She is always really kind in the reviews that she leaves and is always really encouraging as well. An excellent piece, Debi, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Jacob, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friends. Love, Debi
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Happy birthday, Rhonda. I haven't kept up with all the updates on Wayne, but I, like others, have kept you in my prayers. I hope all is well there, and I hope you have a wonderful birthday.

Thanks, Debi for the "quadtern", lol! Rules are meant to be broken, right?

Have a great weekend, everyone.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Now, who would know that better than the woman who shares my birthday. After all it had to be in the stars, right?? Well, it is for me. I am a bit of a rebel, believe it or not.
    I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so that is why I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear sis. Love, Debi
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Debi,

You are such a talented artist. You come up with these birthday poems and they are spot on. Oh, to be half as talented as you. You are a great friend for doing these poems for all of us.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thanks Cecilia, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friends. Love, Debi
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 04-Nov-2024
    you're welcome. If I ever get back to Minnesota we will have to go get a cup of coffee. Wish we would met while I lived there. You are a good friend and I appreciate your encouraging words.

    Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
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It was beyond sweet and very special for Rhonda, and of course, Debi, you put all your heart into it. Rhonda deserves the best birthday ever and so much more. I pray that the next year is filled with the best blessings the Lord can give both her and Wayne.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, RHONDA
All my thoughts, prayers and love,
Carol

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Carol, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friends. Love, Debi