Unchained
almost didn't make it...33 total reviews
Comment from Martie
Hi Pupa...I'm glad that you are ok now!!
You've expressed the agony of this distressful emotional pull well, even with the way the poem is formed, like you were in danger of there being nothing left. Then hope came and you took one step and than another and were free from whatever chain pulled you down. Well done !
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Hi Pupa...I'm glad that you are ok now!!
You've expressed the agony of this distressful emotional pull well, even with the way the poem is formed, like you were in danger of there being nothing left. Then hope came and you took one step and than another and were free from whatever chain pulled you down. Well done !
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Hi Martie, thank you for a very encouraging review. Yes, it sometimes really feels that way, thank God there is always hope.
Love
Pupa
Comment from mariejames
I love the style and format of this poem. It's really very cool; it's fun to read. You've done a wonderful job with it-it must have been a challenging one to write. Very nicely done! I just may try something like this.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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I love the style and format of this poem. It's really very cool; it's fun to read. You've done a wonderful job with it-it must have been a challenging one to write. Very nicely done! I just may try something like this.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Hi Marie, thanks for such an encouraging review and kind rating. Yes you should try it, it is such fun. I am glad you liked it.
Love
Pupa
Comment from angel of the quill
all of us have ups and downs
i wish mine was easier
sometimes i do that per day
sometimes it takes weeks
for a day i was hopeful
that is nearly two weeks ago
now i am just strained
so when i read your poem
i so identify with it
and the way you expressed it
great work
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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all of us have ups and downs
i wish mine was easier
sometimes i do that per day
sometimes it takes weeks
for a day i was hopeful
that is nearly two weeks ago
now i am just strained
so when i read your poem
i so identify with it
and the way you expressed it
great work
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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My dear friend, you make me sad when you feel that way. I wish I could be of any help to you, please let me know.
Thanks for the encouraging comments.
Love
Pupa
Comment from bard owl
Depression and grief, sorrow and anger, hate and pain, blame and self-pity are the banes of mankind. The human heart is so vulnerable to those kind of emotions and sometimes it feels like what your poem expresses. Hope everything gets better and better as each day passes. You are such kind and sensitive person. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Depression and grief, sorrow and anger, hate and pain, blame and self-pity are the banes of mankind. The human heart is so vulnerable to those kind of emotions and sometimes it feels like what your poem expresses. Hope everything gets better and better as each day passes. You are such kind and sensitive person. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Oh Linda, your comments have touched me and I thank you for your kindness.
Glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa
Comment from storymama
First, I am glad that you are OK now. I love the way you have written this. It is attractive to look at and yet is such a touching poem. I like the letting go of your burdens one by one until you can reach the surface and breath again part. Very sound advice. God bless you.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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First, I am glad that you are OK now. I love the way you have written this. It is attractive to look at and yet is such a touching poem. I like the letting go of your burdens one by one until you can reach the surface and breath again part. Very sound advice. God bless you.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Thank you so much, storymama, your review is most encouraging and much appreciated.
Love
Pupa
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You are very welcome, Pupa. God bless.
Comment from Kingsland
this poem is formatted like the person
going under and then rising back to the surface
that was a very clever way to format this well written verse
it also had very goods imagery and flow to it thoughts
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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this poem is formatted like the person
going under and then rising back to the surface
that was a very clever way to format this well written verse
it also had very goods imagery and flow to it thoughts
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Thanks John, your comments on this poem are most appreciated. I am very glad you liked the form too.
Love
Pupa
Comment from makata
I love your poem. It encourages one to relax and unwind because hope is just in front of you. Trying to untangle yourself from the complexity of problems is a sure way to attain the real hope of seeing the end of the tunnel. I like the format of your poem and nice imagery too. Good job!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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I love your poem. It encourages one to relax and unwind because hope is just in front of you. Trying to untangle yourself from the complexity of problems is a sure way to attain the real hope of seeing the end of the tunnel. I like the format of your poem and nice imagery too. Good job!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Thanks Makata, your reviews are always encouraging and uplifting, I appreciate that a lot.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Ida B
I really love your poems because I can feel the passion when you write.This poem makes me think of someone who is very depressed and is at wits end.They see no light at the end of the tunnel.They want to express these feeling but have noone.I have had times when I felt depressed and lonely with noone to talk to so I just write in my journal and I always feel better. Pupa you are GREAT!! Keep writing those great poems.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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I really love your poems because I can feel the passion when you write.This poem makes me think of someone who is very depressed and is at wits end.They see no light at the end of the tunnel.They want to express these feeling but have noone.I have had times when I felt depressed and lonely with noone to talk to so I just write in my journal and I always feel better. Pupa you are GREAT!! Keep writing those great poems.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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Ida, your very uplifting review and encouraging comments have really made my day, thanks a million. You should post what you express in your journal and you feel even better, when reviews come in...
Love
Pupa
Comment from fastdigits
Beautifully and uniquely done. First
taking the reader down the path of
drowning in your feelings of dispair,
everything looking so bleak, but then hitting
the bottom, letting go of all those thoughts
of grief, sorrow, anger, hate and all the other
negative attitudes, throwing them away and
coming up from the dark bottom into the light
of the surface to start over again.
Well done
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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Beautifully and uniquely done. First
taking the reader down the path of
drowning in your feelings of dispair,
everything looking so bleak, but then hitting
the bottom, letting go of all those thoughts
of grief, sorrow, anger, hate and all the other
negative attitudes, throwing them away and
coming up from the dark bottom into the light
of the surface to start over again.
Well done
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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Thanks fastdigits, always encouraging and kind. Your reviews are much appreciated, dear friend.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Teri7
I am very glad you said you were okay. It would hurt me if you were not. You are a great friend. You did a very good job on this poem. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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I am very glad you said you were okay. It would hurt me if you were not. You are a great friend. You did a very good job on this poem. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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Yes, I wrote it for friends like you Teri! I know how we worry about each other...
Thanks for another great review.
Love
Pupa