Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
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Comment from penelope
Definitely the best acrostic I've ever read, Helvi. I love how you poke fun at yourself too and kept your rhymthm and even rhymed the whole thing. You absolutely deserved to win and congratulations. Penelope
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Definitely the best acrostic I've ever read, Helvi. I love how you poke fun at yourself too and kept your rhymthm and even rhymed the whole thing. You absolutely deserved to win and congratulations. Penelope
Comment Written 23-Jun-2009
Comment from lizziebach
You deserve to win this contest just for giving this a go! You've done a brilliant job of it as well, I thought every line read well and didn't seem forced or contrived in order to fit the pattern. A fantastic effort!
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You deserve to win this contest just for giving this a go! You've done a brilliant job of it as well, I thought every line read well and didn't seem forced or contrived in order to fit the pattern. A fantastic effort!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
Comment from jadapenn
Yep, you choose the longest word then you just have to sit tight and keep going. This is terrific in no small way. You created a masterpiece. One gets the impression that you started off in good spirit and then curled around in your seat around the middle and were chewing the last of your fingernails at the end.
Well penned. regards jada
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Yep, you choose the longest word then you just have to sit tight and keep going. This is terrific in no small way. You created a masterpiece. One gets the impression that you started off in good spirit and then curled around in your seat around the middle and were chewing the last of your fingernails at the end.
Well penned. regards jada
Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
Comment from Pacinogal
Hi Helvi,
I believe you have spelled the word correctly!!!
I also can't believe you pulled this one off.
I wish I had another six cuz this deserves it.
What an accomplishment!
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!!!
Kindly,
Kathy
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Hi Helvi,
I believe you have spelled the word correctly!!!
I also can't believe you pulled this one off.
I wish I had another six cuz this deserves it.
What an accomplishment!
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!!!
Kindly,
Kathy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
Comment from Nicnac
Oh, insanity it was! And the result is BRILLIANCE!
Oh, my gosh! What were you thinking, Helvi? haha
This exhausts me just THINKING about tackling such an atrocious word. LOL
Standing ovation!
Bravo!
You can put away that straight-jacket... LOL... you won't be needing it. You've done a fabulous job!
I loved every line, but especially:
Oblivious to my own fate, I didn't look ahead.
Careless by my own accords, my hopes have slipped to dread.
I'm in awe at your diligence to attack that word! LOL
I really enjoyed this poem
*SMILES*
Nic
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Oh, insanity it was! And the result is BRILLIANCE!
Oh, my gosh! What were you thinking, Helvi? haha
This exhausts me just THINKING about tackling such an atrocious word. LOL
Standing ovation!
Bravo!
You can put away that straight-jacket... LOL... you won't be needing it. You've done a fabulous job!
I loved every line, but especially:
Oblivious to my own fate, I didn't look ahead.
Careless by my own accords, my hopes have slipped to dread.
I'm in awe at your diligence to attack that word! LOL
I really enjoyed this poem
*SMILES*
Nic
Comment Written 15-Jun-2009
Comment from jlsavell
Helvi2, actually this was quite entertaining. I do not know how you manged to pull it off, but you did. You also manged a rhyme scheme to boot. Salute to the poet's brain and hand. jlsavell
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Helvi2, actually this was quite entertaining. I do not know how you manged to pull it off, but you did. You also manged a rhyme scheme to boot. Salute to the poet's brain and hand. jlsavell
Comment Written 15-Jun-2009
Comment from SRIPPE
Smiling, yes i was. where did you find the words? Loved it. Amusing, funny, lyrical and gee...haven't we all felt that was one time or another? Great.
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Smiling, yes i was. where did you find the words? Loved it. Amusing, funny, lyrical and gee...haven't we all felt that was one time or another? Great.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2009
Comment from luna
Helvi, I thought this was a fine acrostic, very creative. I really liked it, and the way you highlighted the first letter to make it apparent that the poem was an acrostic. Just one suggestion: I think that headfirst is one word; you have it as two (I could be wrong, I don't have my dictionary by my side). But I think it's one word.
Great poem! Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Yours,
Luna *smile*
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Helvi, I thought this was a fine acrostic, very creative. I really liked it, and the way you highlighted the first letter to make it apparent that the poem was an acrostic. Just one suggestion: I think that headfirst is one word; you have it as two (I could be wrong, I don't have my dictionary by my side). But I think it's one word.
Great poem! Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Yours,
Luna *smile*
Comment Written 14-Jun-2009
Comment from zlp22
Great job at a type of poem that is not easy to write. I think your poem says alot about a writers life. Good luck in the contest.
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Great job at a type of poem that is not easy to write. I think your poem says alot about a writers life. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2009
Comment from Janilou
LOL A very clever and witty poem. You outdid yourself in the last three lines, by the way.
Great poem. I don't know how you did it, but I take my hat off to you! Well done. Nothing to correct here.
Jani
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LOL A very clever and witty poem. You outdid yourself in the last three lines, by the way.
Great poem. I don't know how you did it, but I take my hat off to you! Well done. Nothing to correct here.
Jani
Comment Written 13-Jun-2009