Falling One
A falling blossom affected in flight by the wind.24 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
Polele - What a wonderful short, sweet, and to the point 5/7/5 poem for the contest. You use of words is fantastic. Kat
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
Polele - What a wonderful short, sweet, and to the point 5/7/5 poem for the contest. You use of words is fantastic. Kat
Comment Written 26-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
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I thank you for the positive vibes Mizkat...Cheers (:))
Comment from TSPoet
First your 5-7-5
is spot on
The motion of your words with this
blossom is wonderfull
The imagery is so alive and with a
warm soothing feel of emotion
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
First your 5-7-5
is spot on
The motion of your words with this
blossom is wonderfull
The imagery is so alive and with a
warm soothing feel of emotion
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 26-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
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Thank you for this positive feedback TSPoet...much appreciated.
Comment from rashi kumar
A very lovely senryu!
Picturesque!
I love the flow in this little poem,it sounds very nice when read aloud.
All the best!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
A very lovely senryu!
Picturesque!
I love the flow in this little poem,it sounds very nice when read aloud.
All the best!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
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Thank you Kumar...it is a first try for me.
Comment from ernesto escarro
Falling One
I can not exactly tell what happen
but I may say, this mean a beautiful child
who either died or in the aftermath with faded beauty,
getting married and separated her family.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
Falling One
I can not exactly tell what happen
but I may say, this mean a beautiful child
who either died or in the aftermath with faded beauty,
getting married and separated her family.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011
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Thanks Escarro, to be honest it is really about the visual effect of a falling flower and I guess it has something to do with 'beauty'.
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thanks.