Haggarty
Experiments of evil33 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
My Susan is back again--and in rare form. This is an excellent piece that knocks mine out of the park. But I don't mind losing to you. Gruesome picture. Rich details. Good build up of suspense. Dynamite ending! Freaked me out!
Hugs,
Shari
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2011
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My Susan is back again--and in rare form. This is an excellent piece that knocks mine out of the park. But I don't mind losing to you. Gruesome picture. Rich details. Good build up of suspense. Dynamite ending! Freaked me out!
Hugs,
Shari
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2011
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Wow, Shari! Love you for the enthusiasm for this one! I enjoy creepy tales and I had to use this pix! LORD! I've NEVER seen anything like it! LOL! Thank you for this kind and enthusiastic review...I really appreciate! xoxo susan
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
what a horrific story...
just can't imagine these
types of experiments.
and that picture is terrible
and so heart-breaking to see.
giant rat - singular - thus was sifting
Good luck with the contest, Susan.
Margaret
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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what a horrific story...
just can't imagine these
types of experiments.
and that picture is terrible
and so heart-breaking to see.
giant rat - singular - thus was sifting
Good luck with the contest, Susan.
Margaret
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Hi Margaret! I found that picture online of course and had to try to make a story for it. I have never seen anything so strange. Whoever photoshopped it was good! I guess it's a bit like the "Island Of Dr. Moreau"? With Bert Lancaster...it was so stupid tho. Like many horror movies. Lol! ") Thank you for reading this for me Margaret. I don't know how you do it. I can barely keep up anymore. Look for your magazines in the mail? Hope you will enjoy them! AND a hello to your family! Love, susan
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Thank you so much, Susan. I'll look out for them. As for keeping up, I don't... I answer a few reviews at a time, inbetween clearing messages and reviewing those I follow... and writing. M xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is definately a horror story. I have a feeling Mr. Oppenheimer is finished with his creations. He should have stopped a while ago. Good luck with the contest.
Her husbands creations were nothing short of rodents. (husband's)
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2011
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This is definately a horror story. I have a feeling Mr. Oppenheimer is finished with his creations. He should have stopped a while ago. Good luck with the contest.
Her husbands creations were nothing short of rodents. (husband's)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2011
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hi Barbara! I fixed that apostrophe! Thank YOU! I found this pix and just had to try and write something for it! SOMEONE is good at photoshop! LORD! It's so real looking...one fan of mine just couldn't stand to read this! SO, thanks for your kindness and bravery! I do appreciate that...xoxo, susan
Comment from Darla9
This is really good. I was fooled by Haggerty, she seemed to be such a friendly harmless creature. That picture is super creepy LOL. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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This is really good. I was fooled by Haggerty, she seemed to be such a friendly harmless creature. That picture is super creepy LOL. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Hi Darla! Thank you! Isn't that pix odd? I have NEVER seen anything so weird. BUT fun to write a story with! ") Usually I write and look for illustrations, this time I tried the other way around. Thanks again! ") Susan
Comment from livingwords
This is interesting, enhanced by the picture of my ex-wife. How on earth did you find it. The story had a scary ending, but there wasn't much build on the tension. Great writing, but not quite horrifying. Best, Dan :))
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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This is interesting, enhanced by the picture of my ex-wife. How on earth did you find it. The story had a scary ending, but there wasn't much build on the tension. Great writing, but not quite horrifying. Best, Dan :))
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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DAN! THIS is hilarious! The second review that has me rolling...It's too late to add tension, but I promise to remember your input for the next time. Thank you! Bless your heart if your ex was this awful...Oh, Lord. Thank you again! Susan
Comment from humpwhistle
Well, Suse that certainly is a disturbing image, and your story does it justice. I'm amazed at how you can go from writing a hummingbird one day, to Haggarty the next. I like that you avoided so many of the cliches that run through most horror stories. Sheila J. Oppenheimer? Her husband's first name wouldn't be Alan, would it? Nice joke.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2011
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Well, Suse that certainly is a disturbing image, and your story does it justice. I'm amazed at how you can go from writing a hummingbird one day, to Haggarty the next. I like that you avoided so many of the cliches that run through most horror stories. Sheila J. Oppenheimer? Her husband's first name wouldn't be Alan, would it? Nice joke.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2011
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LOL! Good one too! I once had a little white dog that we called Phineas (spelled wrong) P. Oppenheimer, or "Opie"...he was a yapper and we gave him to a friend! And yes, this picture was so weird, I had to write something for it? I've never seen anything like it! Someone is great at Photoshop! Thanks for a great reveiw Lee! Peace and happy days to you too!! Suse
Comment from robina1978
Never seen anything like your photo. looks a bit like a very weird monkey.
Just now her husband has found a buyer for Haggerty, he does not get chased off but eaten I gather.
And he is still hungry for more.
The open end leaves it up to your reader to think of more horror to come. This is a real horror story and held my attention all the way.
All the best for the contest Susan.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Never seen anything like your photo. looks a bit like a very weird monkey.
Just now her husband has found a buyer for Haggerty, he does not get chased off but eaten I gather.
And he is still hungry for more.
The open end leaves it up to your reader to think of more horror to come. This is a real horror story and held my attention all the way.
All the best for the contest Susan.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Hi Ine! Yes, it does...so odd. I sure had fun with this. See what they can do with computers nowadays? LORD! ")) Thank you for this kind review Ine! Susan
Comment from c_lucas
Always keep the twelve guage close by. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Your creative mind excels in this story. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Always keep the twelve guage close by. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Your creative mind excels in this story. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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HA! I used to...it's hidden away for now. I'm thinking of getting a .38 for target practice someday. If I saw this for real, I'd run! ") Thank you, Charlie. Keep your lights on! ")
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You're welcome, Susan. Charlie
Comment from Rama Rao
This is a horror story of a different kind. I liked your take on the scientific experiments and the horror they may cause. It was almost like the Frankeinsten story.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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This is a horror story of a different kind. I liked your take on the scientific experiments and the horror they may cause. It was almost like the Frankeinsten story.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Hi Ramarao! Thank you! I tried to be original...there was a movie called "The Island Of Dr. Moreau" that was along these lines. But I couldn't resist trying to come up with something to go with the picture I found. Susan
Comment from missy98writer
Susan,
you've written an entertaining story. The art work is ugly as hell. Your descriptive writing is very good in this. You do an excellent job with showing and not telling. I was thrilled as I read. You story is like those Alfred Hitchcock's presents, Night Gallery or Twilight Zone I used to watch late night with my dad as reruns on TV. Mrs.. I enjoyed this descriptive of the cold Shelia: "She was pouring another glass of wine, when her husband's screams ripped her world apart." Oppenheimber is about to become Haggerty's lunch. I wish you good luck in the contest. I'd recommend your story to other reviewers. I always love your short stories. Have a lovely day, my friend. Love ya...Melissa!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Susan,
you've written an entertaining story. The art work is ugly as hell. Your descriptive writing is very good in this. You do an excellent job with showing and not telling. I was thrilled as I read. You story is like those Alfred Hitchcock's presents, Night Gallery or Twilight Zone I used to watch late night with my dad as reruns on TV. Mrs.. I enjoyed this descriptive of the cold Shelia: "She was pouring another glass of wine, when her husband's screams ripped her world apart." Oppenheimber is about to become Haggerty's lunch. I wish you good luck in the contest. I'd recommend your story to other reviewers. I always love your short stories. Have a lovely day, my friend. Love ya...Melissa!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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HI Melissa! I am ALWAYS just elated when you like my stuff. I used to watch Night Gallery all the time. Old Sammy Terry shows, all that. Halloween is fun, well, until people ruin it with mean stuff. Good to hear from you MissM! HUG! Susan