Wicked Fun
It's that time of year.30 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Moohaahaahaaa - BOO! (Gee, I guess it brings out the kid in me too! LOL) I LOVE this sweet poem - goose-bumpy, spooky, creepy fun in rhyming couplets - who could ask for more? :)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Moohaahaahaaa - BOO! (Gee, I guess it brings out the kid in me too! LOL) I LOVE this sweet poem - goose-bumpy, spooky, creepy fun in rhyming couplets - who could ask for more? :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thanks for the great review and words of encouragement.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ngamminpye
The title of the poem really suits well. I like the inclusion of black cat but chasing the frighten mouse is something which happens normally inside the house. I'll prefer that the cat is scared too.
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The title of the poem really suits well. I like the inclusion of black cat but chasing the frighten mouse is something which happens normally inside the house. I'll prefer that the cat is scared too.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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This black cat is a witch's cat, nothing scares her. LOL. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Sefiros
Nice and simple. I can't rhyme worth a damn so I can appreciate the effort put into this poem. I would try for a darker tone, like more focus on the monsters and what they would do to mortals. But it's just a thought. good luck next time.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Nice and simple. I can't rhyme worth a damn so I can appreciate the effort put into this poem. I would try for a darker tone, like more focus on the monsters and what they would do to mortals. But it's just a thought. good luck next time.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thanks for the thoughts and the review. I just like the good old scare of frankenstein and witches with pointy hats. All good fun.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I like the light touch you used in this Halloween-theme poem. Makes the kid in me want popcorn balls in my treat sack. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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I like the light touch you used in this Halloween-theme poem. Makes the kid in me want popcorn balls in my treat sack. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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I'm a strictly chocolate candy bar kind of girl. I'll trade you popcorn balls for your chocolate. Thanks for the great review.
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It's been a long time since anyone has offered popcorn balls, I think. I like the chocolate, too.
Comment from Jesse Bartek
Great poem I loved the rhythm and beat of this seasoned poem. The colors you used worked very well. While i was reading it i couldn't help but smile and grin throughout it. you brought the kid out of me. i enjoyed the read very much . thank you.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Great poem I loved the rhythm and beat of this seasoned poem. The colors you used worked very well. While i was reading it i couldn't help but smile and grin throughout it. you brought the kid out of me. i enjoyed the read very much . thank you.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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So what are you gonna be for Halloween? I'm thinking of being a writer. At least for the night, I can pretend to be successful. Thanks for the great review.
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i'm not sure what or who i'll be that night as of yet. your welcome.
Comment from callihoney
Plenty of fun in this seasonal piece. I like the celebratory spirit and mention of the pleasure of indulging in fear.
I'd like to see more attention to the stress patterns, accented and unaccented syllables. You can get a much stronger sound with a regular pattern of stresses.
Keeping the same number of syllables per line can also standardize the sound to the reader's ear and give it a more powerful symmetry.
Nice work!
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Plenty of fun in this seasonal piece. I like the celebratory spirit and mention of the pleasure of indulging in fear.
I'd like to see more attention to the stress patterns, accented and unaccented syllables. You can get a much stronger sound with a regular pattern of stresses.
Keeping the same number of syllables per line can also standardize the sound to the reader's ear and give it a more powerful symmetry.
Nice work!
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
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I still think of poetry like a third grader. Thank you for the lesson though, every bit of information I get is a help. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from terry drake
Maybe I should dress in costume this year. The kids all seem to have fun, it is contagious. Get your cookies and candy in order for your guests.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Maybe I should dress in costume this year. The kids all seem to have fun, it is contagious. Get your cookies and candy in order for your guests.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the great review. Happy Halloween.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Excellent! What a fun theme! Poem flow is excellent with perfect rhyme sequence. Very enjoyable to read. I love the choice of background and font colors. They match the season. Very enjoyable read. Good job!
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Excellent! What a fun theme! Poem flow is excellent with perfect rhyme sequence. Very enjoyable to read. I love the choice of background and font colors. They match the season. Very enjoyable read. Good job!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the great review. It is a fun time of year.
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You are welcome. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
Comment from TammyGail
It is indeed that time of the years and that is my favorite time of the year :) loved your poem and the playful feel to it - made for a great read - excellent use of color scheme
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It is indeed that time of the years and that is my favorite time of the year :) loved your poem and the playful feel to it - made for a great read - excellent use of color scheme
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Halloween is a time to let go a good old fashioned scream. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend I liked this poem it has a fun element as it should have for this time of year you have done really very well I enjoyed regards Jill
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Hello my friend I liked this poem it has a fun element as it should have for this time of year you have done really very well I enjoyed regards Jill
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the great review. Have a great Halloween.