Execution of a girl.
A poem, no rhyme or meter, story poem30 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Ine, I think the picture alone did me in. What a story. Reminds of days I read about in times when they burned witches. And people went along. WOW!! Very well done. Linda xx
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HI Ine, I think the picture alone did me in. What a story. Reminds of days I read about in times when they burned witches. And people went along. WOW!! Very well done. Linda xx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from wiljacro
HI!Ine, what a totally horrific description of the death of a young woman at the hands of a Mob led by two Fanatics. The way that you wrote the unfortunates death thoes is very, very believeable, in as much that it was like being a reluctant onlooker to her demise, under the water. A great read. wiljacro.
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HI!Ine, what a totally horrific description of the death of a young woman at the hands of a Mob led by two Fanatics. The way that you wrote the unfortunates death thoes is very, very believeable, in as much that it was like being a reluctant onlooker to her demise, under the water. A great read. wiljacro.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Pleased you liked it and many thanks for the beautiful six. You made my day.
Comment from beccabootie123
oh my GOD is this a true story? did it really happen. Its' like old world vengence of witches or frankenstein. story written well. picture and color palate play to the piece. well formatted. tell me this is fiction though. kept me engaged from start to finish. I truly thought about nothing else while consuming it.
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oh my GOD is this a true story? did it really happen. Its' like old world vengence of witches or frankenstein. story written well. picture and color palate play to the piece. well formatted. tell me this is fiction though. kept me engaged from start to finish. I truly thought about nothing else while consuming it.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Pleased you liked it Becca and thanks for the gorgeous six. You made my day once more.
Comment from Shadow Pahn
Ahhh the good old Dutch times where we would drown and burn witches!
You are very descriptive and it comes over really well.
Goed gedaan ine!
I have little to offer on constructive feedback!
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Ahhh the good old Dutch times where we would drown and burn witches!
You are very descriptive and it comes over really well.
Goed gedaan ine!
I have little to offer on constructive feedback!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Dankjewel.
Comment from Righteous Riter
I really felt this piece. The very descriptive words made my mind work as well as bring the photo to life. This piece displayed the writers passion. This piece made me feel like I was there. Good work.
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I really felt this piece. The very descriptive words made my mind work as well as bring the photo to life. This piece displayed the writers passion. This piece made me feel like I was there. Good work.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was the worst ever, most terrifying read I have ever read! And to think, that really does and has happened. And there are really men out there now who do think this way about women, I pray they rot in hell too!! How did you manage to put this into words? To feel what a person would feel like in those extreme conditions? Amazing writing, Ine, you certainly surprised me! Well worth one of my valuable 6s!! xsx Sandra
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That was the worst ever, most terrifying read I have ever read! And to think, that really does and has happened. And there are really men out there now who do think this way about women, I pray they rot in hell too!! How did you manage to put this into words? To feel what a person would feel like in those extreme conditions? Amazing writing, Ine, you certainly surprised me! Well worth one of my valuable 6s!! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Thanks ever so much for the lovely six. You made my day.
Comment from Gungalo
Her long golden locks took on the appearance of wavering tentacles around her face. The tension left her body. Her eyes glazed. She was now limp as her delicate arms gracefully moved with the current in the water, mocking the dance of a peaceful ballerina, slowly turning in her sinister jewelry box.
A good story Robina and a blow by blow description of her death. It seems as if she were in a country where they have no laws.
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Her long golden locks took on the appearance of wavering tentacles around her face. The tension left her body. Her eyes glazed. She was now limp as her delicate arms gracefully moved with the current in the water, mocking the dance of a peaceful ballerina, slowly turning in her sinister jewelry box.
A good story Robina and a blow by blow description of her death. It seems as if she were in a country where they have no laws.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
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You to Robina.
Comment from judelesemann
WOW! What a remarkable piece of literature. Yor descriptions are so vivid and paint a very graphic picture of the events taking place. Fantastic! It was horrifying and fascinating. Be blessed, Jude
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WOW! What a remarkable piece of literature. Yor descriptions are so vivid and paint a very graphic picture of the events taking place. Fantastic! It was horrifying and fascinating. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Thanks so much for the marvelous rating.
Comment from Joannforsberg
Wow. You really created a frightening visual scene here. Well done with words and sense of tensity. It made me think of the witch hunts through out time where a woman would be drowned because some one falsely accused her. Excellent use of wording. JO
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Wow. You really created a frightening visual scene here. Well done with words and sense of tensity. It made me think of the witch hunts through out time where a woman would be drowned because some one falsely accused her. Excellent use of wording. JO
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Yes you are right and thanks so much for the lovely 6.
Comment from c_lucas
Although I felt that this was in modern times, it reminded me of witch persecutions of the middle ages. This is very well written with a savage flow of words.
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Although I felt that this was in modern times, it reminded me of witch persecutions of the middle ages. This is very well written with a savage flow of words.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
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You're welcome, Ine. Charlie