The Mayors' Stroll
It ain't always wise to let it all hang out...32 total reviews
Comment from NicciFaye
You really tickle me. Sick humor begets you. This is soooo funny. You came up with this truly funny and crazy story all from this picture. I believe that your imagination runs wildly, naked at night when the full moon is out.
Love it.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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You really tickle me. Sick humor begets you. This is soooo funny. You came up with this truly funny and crazy story all from this picture. I believe that your imagination runs wildly, naked at night when the full moon is out.
Love it.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Yep ;). Thanks again Nicci!
Comment from GratefullyRecovering
lol very well done! :) Very imaginative and well put together :) You always do good pieces tho so I'm not all that surprised ;) Thanks for sharing! And making me smile :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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lol very well done! :) Very imaginative and well put together :) You always do good pieces tho so I'm not all that surprised ;) Thanks for sharing! And making me smile :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to read it. I really do appreciate it!
Comment from EmberSnowcat
Always enjoy a laugh right before work. Your words sparked that smile yet again! Excellent wording, I am such a huge fan of your work. As a reader, I always feel I'm in a different time period or even a different world when reading your work. I always have a hard time finding Spag in your stories and poems, always a good thing! Keep up the wonderful work my friend! You are a true talented writer!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Always enjoy a laugh right before work. Your words sparked that smile yet again! Excellent wording, I am such a huge fan of your work. As a reader, I always feel I'm in a different time period or even a different world when reading your work. I always have a hard time finding Spag in your stories and poems, always a good thing! Keep up the wonderful work my friend! You are a true talented writer!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thanks ES, I appreciate those kind comments. I try to post only my best on FanStory, as well as several other writing communities I frequent. I always smile when I see you left a comment.
Thanks again!
Comment from misscookie
You had my attention from the first line to the last
And I thought it was very funny and delight to read.
There is a message within this poem
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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You had my attention from the first line to the last
And I thought it was very funny and delight to read.
There is a message within this poem
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thanks misscookie, I am so glad that you enjoyed it. Feel free to stop by and read anytime. I will always do my best to entertain you.
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Your very welcome.Have a blessed day, until next time.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend it reads very well through the verses with good rhyme and it made me smile I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend it reads very well through the verses with good rhyme and it made me smile I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thanks Jill, I appreciate that glowing review. I can't seem to shake that seedier, more sinister side, even when writing poetry. I suppose it's simply how I'm wired.
Thanks again!
Comment from bayoupoet
Your poem, though crude, is very hilarious. It is well written with great rhyme, rhythm, form, and flow. The picture is perfect for this poem. It is a pleasure to read for you.
sandra
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Your poem, though crude, is very hilarious. It is well written with great rhyme, rhythm, form, and flow. The picture is perfect for this poem. It is a pleasure to read for you.
sandra
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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I do apologize for the crudeness. I just can't seem to keep my darker side at bay and from surfacing, even while writing poetry.
I'm glad you didn't find it too naughty. I appreciate the review.
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You are very welcome. It made me laugh!
Comment from lorijean
A very well written an d funny poem, it just bounced along from beginning to end, the poor old mayor, how embarrassing for this noble soul......
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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A very well written an d funny poem, it just bounced along from beginning to end, the poor old mayor, how embarrassing for this noble soul......
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thanks lorijean. I sure do appreciate the read and your comments.
Comment from barkingdog
LOL I guess this could happen to any fellow and he'd not be aware.
I liked the embarrassed women, one choking the other ran away.
You did this so well with good rhyme and even tempo.
Thank you for making me smile.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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LOL I guess this could happen to any fellow and he'd not be aware.
I liked the embarrassed women, one choking the other ran away.
You did this so well with good rhyme and even tempo.
Thank you for making me smile.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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You are welcome barking, thanks for reading it and the glowing review. Oh, by the way, my Chihuahua Gidget says "WOOF"...
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Great name for a Chihuahua! arf-arf!(that's for Gidget)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Very funny write, and I see you continued it on with the author's notes down the bottom. This is a great stroll with the Mayor of Yoken through his walk to the meeting. Very good.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Very funny write, and I see you continued it on with the author's notes down the bottom. This is a great stroll with the Mayor of Yoken through his walk to the meeting. Very good.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thanks Pearl. And, if I may be so bold, it does contain a "pearl" of wisdom. Always be aware of your surroundings, lol.
Thanks so much again.
Comment from JM daSilva
Very funny way to show blindness and misinterpretation. Sometimes a person has a problem anybody can see except them. They don't see the forest for the trees. Well put. Great poem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Very funny way to show blindness and misinterpretation. Sometimes a person has a problem anybody can see except them. They don't see the forest for the trees. Well put. Great poem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thanks JM, your reviews and comments are always greatly appreciated.
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Welcome.