When Two Become One
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Comment from seanb29
I enjoyed the poem, but maybe it could have been a little longer. Right when I was getting into the story, it ended. The picture was a good choice, it seems to capture the mood perfectly.
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I enjoyed the poem, but maybe it could have been a little longer. Right when I was getting into the story, it ended. The picture was a good choice, it seems to capture the mood perfectly.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
Comment from whispersofthesoul
+hiya,
this is really simple seet love poem. the construction is great simply put together. it is a good prompt entry.
have you thought about breaking it up slightly? (just a suggestion its ok as it is)
whispers xx
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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+hiya,
this is really simple seet love poem. the construction is great simply put together. it is a good prompt entry.
have you thought about breaking it up slightly? (just a suggestion its ok as it is)
whispers xx
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the review!
Comment from lorijean
A lovely worded love poem, very emotional, love it, well done and thank you for sharing, the photograph is just perfect .....
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A lovely worded love poem, very emotional, love it, well done and thank you for sharing, the photograph is just perfect .....
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Thank you!!