Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "A new reality for Leslie Ann"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
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Comment from emjaihammond
What a wonderful idea to rhyme a story poem and make it into a book. You have written an interesting and entertaining story, easy to read and with a lot of character interest. I haven't read it all, but even coming in late, I can see it is a success. Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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What a wonderful idea to rhyme a story poem and make it into a book. You have written an interesting and entertaining story, easy to read and with a lot of character interest. I haven't read it all, but even coming in late, I can see it is a success. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thanks, emjaihammond! I'm delighted you enjoyed my story. It was a challenge, but also fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Gungalo
Titan this has been a very good book and the story line being rhymed made it something else. Great write poet and we kiss goodbye Leslie Ann.
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Titan this has been a very good book and the story line being rhymed made it something else. Great write poet and we kiss goodbye Leslie Ann.
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thanks again, my friend!!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
>>You're a pitiful little twit."
How true! But she learned her lesson at last. You left her alone with no one, tho. I do wish you'd have given her real love. We ALL deserve that, and that's all she was looking for.
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>>You're a pitiful little twit."
How true! But she learned her lesson at last. You left her alone with no one, tho. I do wish you'd have given her real love. We ALL deserve that, and that's all she was looking for.
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Sorry, Phyllis. I've known women like Leslie Ann and I wasn't ready to give her a free pass. I like happy ending, too. Thanks so much for your review and rating!
Comment from Curly Girly
Hi Dossie,
Anothe fun read from you. I see it has a fitting end. She is left alone and unmarried. It seems to me a lot of Hollywood stars are like that!
A few typos:
Leslie Ann flinched with Mary Ann raised her hand,
Leslie Ann flinched WHEN Mary Ann raised her hand,
And watched her grasped for something out of reach.
And watched her grasp for something out of reach.
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Hi Dossie,
Anothe fun read from you. I see it has a fitting end. She is left alone and unmarried. It seems to me a lot of Hollywood stars are like that!
A few typos:
Leslie Ann flinched with Mary Ann raised her hand,
Leslie Ann flinched WHEN Mary Ann raised her hand,
And watched her grasped for something out of reach.
And watched her grasp for something out of reach.
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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I always know you will catch my boo boos - LOL. Seriously, I appreciate your support and encouragement, especially with this story-poem book. It got to be a bit challenging and I was more than happy when I was able to end it. Be blessed!
Comment from Eigle Rull
This is truly amazing that you can write a story in verses. I found no errors. It was easy to read and understand also. It held my interest all the way through it. I enjoyed reading it and think it was an excellent job.
Always with respect,
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This is truly amazing that you can write a story in verses. I found no errors. It was easy to read and understand also. It held my interest all the way through it. I enjoyed reading it and think it was an excellent job.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thanks so much, Eigle Rull, for your support and encouragement, especially with this Leslie Ann saga. I appreciate it. Dossie
Comment from Spitfire
I admire you for completing a story in this rhyming format. You successfully tied up loose ends and gave the reason why the prank went wrong. Thomas appears to be the villain here as much as Mary Ann. And I love the part about the values her parents had and how they shaped their daughter. An enjoyable read. Congrats on finishing.
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I admire you for completing a story in this rhyming format. You successfully tied up loose ends and gave the reason why the prank went wrong. Thomas appears to be the villain here as much as Mary Ann. And I love the part about the values her parents had and how they shaped their daughter. An enjoyable read. Congrats on finishing.
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Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thanks, Spitfire, for your continuing support and encouragement, especially with this Leslie Ann saga. I appreciate it. Dossie