Comment from Deniz22

Excellent

Wrap ourselves in One who loves us and leasing to a better world where Childlike faith will realize its fulfillment in self and others.

Nice muse, friend.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013

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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Nanette Mary

Excellent

Hullo Anupam Sharma ...

I enjoyed reading this short work of yours - what you say in the script as well your Notes at the end. Yes and no .... the ideas formed during childhood are sometimes shattered in adult life and yet .... that time of our lives has so much to give us when we realise that each new day is a gift from God, filled with His graces which enable us to deal with the challenges that confront us. Now, at the age of 84, I think that old age is the best part because we can now look forward to eternal life with God.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013

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I appreciate your sweet gesture of reading this and sharing your thoughts.it means a lot.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

This is a rather clever little poem - much more profound than first read would indicate. The heart 'imagining' is a wonderful way of saying it yearns, and the last line speaks of sheltered living, or innocence. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013

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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by Dawn Munro on 06-Jul-2013

You are most welcome.

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Very nice 5-7-5 poem, Anupam Sharma. I love the second verse the best,

beneath silver-sweet full moon

Lovely poem!

Best to you the contest.

Foxey

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013

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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Joe Elanoir

Excellent

It really has the rhythm to it and this poem is definitely a master piece.

It somehow increase the thirst of me wanting to go back to my childhood.

Thanks for sharing this my friend. :)

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013

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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by Joe Elanoir on 06-Jul-2013

You are most welcome.

Comment from Little Jewels

Excellent

Well told. The picture goes perfectly. I is hard to grow up and realize that most of what you thought was true as a child was just innocent dreaming.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from ShatiaBizzell

Excellent

I simply enjoyed this piece because it reflected how I was as a child and how I view things now that I am a young adult. The message behind your piece was perfect for the illustration. You did a great job and you should continue writing excellent pieces.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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Comment from mountainwriter49

Excellent

Hello, Poet

What a delightful 5-7-5 poem. I admire your creative
use of language as you develop the concept of one
dreaming, imagining of what life can and might be.
The term in third line makes me think of one in the
'coming of age' stage of life.

A good read this evening. Thanks for sharing.

-Ray

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

I like the way you say it in you explanation, like the butterfly, we struggle and struggle to break out of our cocoon, then, when we get a good look at the reality of real life, we all want back in. Excellent haiku.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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Comment from simonbagh

Excellent

But it is inevitable to stay in cocoon forever, you are to come out of it, and the world outside really differs from the previous one, short but a very meaningful piece, well done,

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)