Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "What Is My Love?"My book of poems and stories
58 total reviews
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is a lovely love poem, it sounds as if you might have found your love. It's wonderful when it works the way God planned, a nightmare when it doesn't. I lived in 32 years of abuse before I could get away with my life. Good poem. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
This is a lovely love poem, it sounds as if you might have found your love. It's wonderful when it works the way God planned, a nightmare when it doesn't. I lived in 32 years of abuse before I could get away with my life. Good poem. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your great review. I really appreciate it. I am so glad you are out of your bad situation.
Comment from gramalot8
I really enjoyed reading this. The words of description regarding your love are awesome. Especially loved the stanza about the storms, thunder, but gentle breeze, etc. Great job and thanks for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
I really enjoyed reading this. The words of description regarding your love are awesome. Especially loved the stanza about the storms, thunder, but gentle breeze, etc. Great job and thanks for sharing with us.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from Matoshka
It may be wishful thinking, but who knows, it could happen. I loved how gentle and loving this felt. I wonder we you meet, will you write to us?I really enjoyed this. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
It may be wishful thinking, but who knows, it could happen. I loved how gentle and loving this felt. I wonder we you meet, will you write to us?I really enjoyed this. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
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You are so welcome AnnieDawn, it was a pleasure. Blessings
Comment from Ridley Williams
This is a beautiful expression of love portrayed in this free verse. I loved your thoughts on your mate with, "Thunder, lightning, a ragging storm,...yet a summer breeze softness,...with gentle fingers". Nicely done. This was a sweet little write, well done, Ridley
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
This is a beautiful expression of love portrayed in this free verse. I loved your thoughts on your mate with, "Thunder, lightning, a ragging storm,...yet a summer breeze softness,...with gentle fingers". Nicely done. This was a sweet little write, well done, Ridley
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from NicciFaye
Nicely written and very pretty. The true loves are always so hard to describe, for we want to you the best and most original words of the heart.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
Nicely written and very pretty. The true loves are always so hard to describe, for we want to you the best and most original words of the heart.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
That is pretty.
He resembles the elements. Thunder,lightening, a raging storm, yet softness like a summer breeze that
touches me with gentle fingers.
I think that is very close to a true description of a man as seen through the eyes of a lover. Well said. Nancy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
That is pretty.
He resembles the elements. Thunder,lightening, a raging storm, yet softness like a summer breeze that
touches me with gentle fingers.
I think that is very close to a true description of a man as seen through the eyes of a lover. Well said. Nancy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from Gabrieltheswifter
Amazing inspirational free-verse! I never used to like free-verse, but it allows you to paint such vivid pictures, and you have more freedom and maneuverability.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
Amazing inspirational free-verse! I never used to like free-verse, but it allows you to paint such vivid pictures, and you have more freedom and maneuverability.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a romantic and tender free verse this is, so smoothly flowing and full of rich imagery. I should think this is a very strong entry for this contest. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
What a romantic and tender free verse this is, so smoothly flowing and full of rich imagery. I should think this is a very strong entry for this contest. Nicely done!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author gave a detailed description of the scene.
The poem was thought provoking. The artwork was perfect and
complimented the poem. Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author gave a detailed description of the scene.
The poem was thought provoking. The artwork was perfect and
complimented the poem. Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate it and good luck to you and your entries.
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful..................true love........expressed so well...He is a smile be getting a smile...... Lovely................
He is a song without words creating joy..............
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
Beautiful..................true love........expressed so well...He is a smile be getting a smile...... Lovely................
He is a song without words creating joy..............
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous review. I do appreciate it.