Remembrance Day 2015
A short story.22 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Second paragraph "man" should be "men". Ending needs to be much more developed as this one does not seem to fit with the rest of what you are trying to say.
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reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Second paragraph "man" should be "men". Ending needs to be much more developed as this one does not seem to fit with the rest of what you are trying to say.
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Comment Written 06-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a nice capture and opinion of this event and the subtle comment (clapper) on its progression, possibly, into obscurity. No one should forget.
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reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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This is a nice capture and opinion of this event and the subtle comment (clapper) on its progression, possibly, into obscurity. No one should forget.
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Comment Written 06-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.