Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "The Secret Garden"My book of poems and stories
25 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
Good rhyming couplets and great imagery. Even a little humor at the end:) Good luck to you in the contest.
~~~Teresa~~~~
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
Good rhyming couplets and great imagery. Even a little humor at the end:) Good luck to you in the contest.
~~~Teresa~~~~
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your comments and review. It is fun taking someones word selection and putting them into a poem.
Comment from jaded831
You managed to use all the words in a very creative way. I was a little disappointed it was all a dream, because I was visualizing everything happening, and it made me laugh. But your poem was smooth and fun to read.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
You managed to use all the words in a very creative way. I was a little disappointed it was all a dream, because I was visualizing everything happening, and it made me laugh. But your poem was smooth and fun to read.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thanks so much for your comments and for reviewing my poem. I am glad You were able to see the humor in it. Thanks again.
Comment from MaBaker
Very good. I read poetry for pleasure as I cant write it myself. Anyway this was good. No typos that I found. Well done. Regards MaBaker
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
Very good. I read poetry for pleasure as I cant write it myself. Anyway this was good. No typos that I found. Well done. Regards MaBaker
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for your time that you put into reviewing my poem. I do appreciate it.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
I like this poem in couplets. Nicely penned and your rhyming is good, not force. I enjoyed reading the poem. May I suggest that you change the colour scheme of the poem, it is a little difficult to read, this may put off some reviewers from reading.
ola thomas
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
I like this poem in couplets. Nicely penned and your rhyming is good, not force. I enjoyed reading the poem. May I suggest that you change the colour scheme of the poem, it is a little difficult to read, this may put off some reviewers from reading.
ola thomas
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for your review and suggestion. I will go to the color scheme and lighten it. Thanks again.
Comment from P1
wow this is really good
you used the words very
efficiently and effectively
and created a poem that is a
very enjoyable read.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
wow this is really good
you used the words very
efficiently and effectively
and created a poem that is a
very enjoyable read.
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for your time that you put into reviewing my poem. I do appreciate it.