Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Fear of Aging"My book of poems and stories
29 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
The art work is great for these words
Yes we all should hold onto our memories
the good times we have had and I guess
be grateful what we have within life.
We can look back on the good times
we also look back within our lives
remembering especially the happy times.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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The art work is great for these words
Yes we all should hold onto our memories
the good times we have had and I guess
be grateful what we have within life.
We can look back on the good times
we also look back within our lives
remembering especially the happy times.
Honeytree
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you so much for your time and it does take time to review and comment. It is appreciated. I am always thrilled when someone likes what I have written. I am always open for suggestions for improvement.
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I liked what you wrote
Honeytree
Comment from MacMhuirich
A wonderful write my friend, even if we lose our sight and hearing we still have memories that we can see in our own mind's eye. This was a joy to read. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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A wonderful write my friend, even if we lose our sight and hearing we still have memories that we can see in our own mind's eye. This was a joy to read. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you so much for your time and it does take time to review and comment. It is appreciated. I am always thrilled when someone likes what I have written. I am always open for suggestions for improvement.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Age changes everything from perceptions to physical forms. However, the most enjoyable memories can not be faded by the aging process. This well written poem descriptively depicts this theme and should also be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Age changes everything from perceptions to physical forms. However, the most enjoyable memories can not be faded by the aging process. This well written poem descriptively depicts this theme and should also be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you for your kind comments and I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Reviews are good as it it is nice to see another persons opinion of your work whether positive or negative. Thank you again for your review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
_ Excellent entry for the contest.
_ It is so true, in mind's eye, we can never forget that which has imprinted itself within us.
_ Well penned and presented.
_ Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Hi,
_ Excellent entry for the contest.
_ It is so true, in mind's eye, we can never forget that which has imprinted itself within us.
_ Well penned and presented.
_ Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you for your kind comments and I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Reviews are good as it is nice to see another persons opinion of your work whether positive or negative. Thank you again for your review.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I have reached that point, having already aged (and still working on it). I can tell you that what we hold dear really does remain in our memory's eye.Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I have reached that point, having already aged (and still working on it). I can tell you that what we hold dear really does remain in our memory's eye.Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you for your kind comments and I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Reviews are good as it is nice to see another persons opinion of your work whether positive or negative. Thank you again for your review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
What a beautiful way to look at facing growing old. I've been afraid of it since I was five years old...seriously, and don't think I've had much resolution to the problem in the fifty years that have passed, but I like your perspective! Thanks for the thought,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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What a beautiful way to look at facing growing old. I've been afraid of it since I was five years old...seriously, and don't think I've had much resolution to the problem in the fifty years that have passed, but I like your perspective! Thanks for the thought,
Rhonda
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you for your kind comments and I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Reviews are good as it is nice to see another persons opinion of your work whether positive or negative. Thank you again for your review.
Comment from kiwijenny
Growing old is not for the faint of heart is it?
You capture it admirably...
May your memory's eye always shine bright...
God bless
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Growing old is not for the faint of heart is it?
You capture it admirably...
May your memory's eye always shine bright...
God bless
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you for your kind comments and I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Reviews are good as it is nice to see another persons opinion of your work whether positive or negative. Thank you again for your review.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a solid emotion writing entry promp. It is brief but descriptive allowing the reader to reflect on the subject matter. What came to mind is the future generation. Today they spend there time viewing the digital virtual world. Will their memories eye be that of an unreal picture that was viewed from screen or the real deal? Well done and Thank you for this inspiring read.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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This is a solid emotion writing entry promp. It is brief but descriptive allowing the reader to reflect on the subject matter. What came to mind is the future generation. Today they spend there time viewing the digital virtual world. Will their memories eye be that of an unreal picture that was viewed from screen or the real deal? Well done and Thank you for this inspiring read.
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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I thank you for your kind comments and I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Reviews are good as it is nice to see another persons opinion of your work whether positive or negative. Thank you again for your review.
Comment from Curly Girly
Thank God for memories. Especially good ones.
You wrote:
Is in your memories eye
Suggest:
Is in your memory's eye
Nicole
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Thank God for memories. Especially good ones.
You wrote:
Is in your memories eye
Suggest:
Is in your memory's eye
Nicole
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for reviewing my entry. I appreciate your suggestion and I am going to correct right away.