Comment from jdrhye

Excellent

Oh, how very true. It appears that we are in an age of thinkers and non-doers. This one hits home as I have recently experienced a deluge of the younger generations entitlement and inability to make sound decisions let alone follow through. Thank you for sharing.
J

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yep, that's very true, kahopt.
You c an sit around and moan and groan about your situation and the state our world is in today. Or, you can get off you ass and do something about it.
And while you might think, How can I make a difference? believe me, every little bit helps.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much ****kahpot

reply by Dean Kuch on 02-Jul-2018

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is really good and I like the message conveyed here. Thinking by itself is dead, bereft of power unless that thinking is fueled by actions. You've said so much in just a few words. I like this! You should do well in the contest. Well done Kahpot!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello kahpot, A five-line poem filled with truth. Action brings results. Inaction is a still and lifeless river, rich in pollution, cluttering our minds. Good commentary. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very nuch****kahpot

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written five-line poem. To only wish for something to happen has no real value, only when we stand up and do something there will be something happening.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much and yes we must stand up****kahpot

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Good for you, Kahpot. I am glad you are still having fun experimenting with different styles o poetic endeavors. This one is a true winner in my eyes...original and strong. Blessings, Bob

ps. I have posted a new chapter and would appreciate your opinion of it very much. (did you fan me yet btw? If you do, you will recieve notices of all my posts ..(Only one per week..LOL) Bob

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much, and I will do that right now and thanks for the reminder****kahpot

reply by Mastery on 02-Jul-2018

Hi, Kahpot. Ye, and now I am a fn of yours also. LOL I have a new post up by the way that is currently paying 1.20 (wink)

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thanks for the wink but your work is good enough without ( so I'll go read it now before it drops)

reply by Mastery on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you again, my friend. :) Bob

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi kahpot. This is a good entry for the contest. You did a good job. What you are saying is definitely true. Sometimes even actions will not make you succeed. But if you don't try then you certainly do not succeed. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much, most encouraging****kahpot

Comment from Beto1

Excellent

Hi again,
I enjoyed reading your thought-provoking poem. I agree, wishes and desires can never be achieved without a need for action. Wise words. I also participated in this contest! Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much and luck and best wishes for you as well****kahpot

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

K,

This is such a simple poem, but it sure packs a heavy punch. *smile* We can hope and pray and wish all day, but until we put our hands and feet into action, things don't really happen.

Lovely thoughts - good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Very nice 5 line poetry submission, Kahpot. Truthful, yes words alone will not cut it, practical application to the ideas spun in our heads will get is done.

Great writing and best to you in the contest.

Lynn

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot