His Cecelia
Everything's just fine...27 total reviews
Comment from aryr
Good luck with the contest. This was rather enjoyable to read, Yvette. You chose a delightful picture which was beautiful but didn't give you a clue about the story. Mac gave no clue that Celia was a cat and he had stolen the body from the vet. Very well done, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Good luck with the contest. This was rather enjoyable to read, Yvette. You chose a delightful picture which was beautiful but didn't give you a clue about the story. Mac gave no clue that Celia was a cat and he had stolen the body from the vet. Very well done, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, aryr, and your supportive comments! :) ;) This was one of those 'enter it to challenge yourself as an author' contests for me ... horror is certainly not 'my genre'! :) ;) And I'm pretty sure this is it for me, though, as I just don't do 'dark' very well...:) ;) Thanx again for stopping in -- here's wishing you a wonderful week of light and uplifting Halloween FUN! :) ;) Yvette :)
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You are so welcome Yvette and if you celebrate Halloween, I do hope it is good.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
He needed someone to love and to love him. It was wrong to steal, but love will make people do things they wouldn't otherwise do. :)
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He needed someone to love and to love him. It was wrong to steal, but love will make people do things they wouldn't otherwise do. :)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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You are a funny lady, Ms. Phyllis! :) ;) This was one of those 'enter it to challenge yourself as an author' contests for me ... horror is certainly not 'my genre'! :) ;) And I'm pretty sure this is it for me, though, as I just don't do 'dark' very well...:) ;) Thanx for stopping in -- here's wishing you a wonderful week of light and uplifting Halloween FUN! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Y. M. Roger
When I saw your title of your story Cecelia got my full attention, why, Stan and I have a cat named Cecelia and fun reading your ghostly story for the contest; until I read with your ending was a of unexpected horror.
I wish you the best in this contest
Gert
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Hello Y. M. Roger
When I saw your title of your story Cecelia got my full attention, why, Stan and I have a cat named Cecelia and fun reading your ghostly story for the contest; until I read with your ending was a of unexpected horror.
I wish you the best in this contest
Gert
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Gert! :) ;) This was one of those 'enter it to challenge yourself as an author' contests for me ... horror is certainly not 'my genre'! :) ;) And I'm pretty sure this is it for me, though, as I just don't do 'dark' very well...:) ;) Thanx again for stopping in -- here's wishing you a wonderful week of light and uplifting Halloween FUN! :) ;) Yvette :)
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You are so welcome Yvette
Gert
Comment from damommy
Here I was thinking it was his wife. This man certainly has a strong attachment to his cat. Here's hoping he gets her stuffed or bronzed if he intends on keeping her.
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Here I was thinking it was his wife. This man certainly has a strong attachment to his cat. Here's hoping he gets her stuffed or bronzed if he intends on keeping her.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Yvonne! :) ;) This was one of those 'enter it to challenge yourself as an author' contests for me ... horror is certainly not 'my genre'! :) ;) And I'm pretty sure this is it for me, though, as I just don't do 'dark' very well...:) ;) Thanx again for stopping in -- here's wishing you a wonderful week of light and uplifting Halloween FUN! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an eerie and ghostly write! You hooked me in ready for the punch line! Much enjoyed and good luck with the flash fiction contest! It will all be over by tomorrow night! He he he, love Dolly x
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This is an eerie and ghostly write! You hooked me in ready for the punch line! Much enjoyed and good luck with the flash fiction contest! It will all be over by tomorrow night! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Dolly! :) ;) This was one of those 'enter it to challenge yourself as an author' contests for me ... horror is certainly not 'my genre'! :) ;) And I'm pretty sure this is it for me, though, as I just don't do 'dark' very well...:) ;) Thanx again for stopping in -- here's wishing you a wonderful week of light and uplifting Halloween FUN! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from pbomar1115
You wrote a first-rate scene about a man named, Mac, and his cat companion waiting at home calmly in the chair where he leaves it before going to work. Mac, a strange guy, can't liberate himself from his dead cat. Very nice scene writing.
Phillip
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You wrote a first-rate scene about a man named, Mac, and his cat companion waiting at home calmly in the chair where he leaves it before going to work. Mac, a strange guy, can't liberate himself from his dead cat. Very nice scene writing.
Phillip
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Phillip! :) ;) This was one of those 'enter it to challenge yourself as an author' contests for me ... horror is certainly not 'my genre'! :) ;) And I'm pretty sure this is it for me, though, as I just don't do 'dark' very well...:) ;) Thanx again for stopping in -- here's wishing you a wonderful week of light and uplifting Halloween FUN! :) ;) Yvette :)
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If you can write good scenes, from my point of view, you will do well in any genre. For instance, this proves it.
Phillip
Comment from lyenochka
Very well told. Of course, the picture gave away the real punchline. I do hope he called a taxidermist first after stealing the cat from the vet's clinic. Thanks for a delightful read!
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Very well told. Of course, the picture gave away the real punchline. I do hope he called a taxidermist first after stealing the cat from the vet's clinic. Thanks for a delightful read!
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Okay...so, I changed the pic -- you were right! :) ;) This was one of those 'enter it to challenge yourself as an author' contests for me ... horror is certainly not 'my genre' so I wasn't paying as close attention as I should have when choosing a pic - almost nervous about the post! :) ;) I'm pretty sure this is it for me, though, as I just don't do 'dark' very well...:) ;) Thanx for stopping in, Helen -- here's wishing you a wonderful week of light and uplifting Halloween FUN! :) ;) Yvette :)