Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your contest entry, kahpot. Good job with the syllable counts per line. I like the color scheme--kinda dismal like the thought you expressed although you did that well. the art is a nice pairing with your words--makes me think of the bad swallowing up the good. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019

Thank you, I understood about the dismal, as the world is a bit that way at the moment< much appreciated****kahpot