Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Please Don't Sting"My book of poems and stories
27 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
What a creative poem. I am so sorry it's a precursor to you having to go to the ER! Your rhyming is impeccable and the photo and background color combine to make this an artistic story poem! Well done:)
Tina
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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What a creative poem. I am so sorry it's a precursor to you having to go to the ER! Your rhyming is impeccable and the photo and background color combine to make this an artistic story poem! Well done:)
Tina
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am very much allergic to bee venom and so are several family members. Lots of epi pens. Yet I have many, many pictures as I love them. Go figure. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate the time you take to comment.
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You are so welcome! It's cool that you respect something your body is allergic to.
Comment from Jg
Wonderful, I'm always impressed by poetry that tells a story . This you have done very well . Anyone can now read this poem and understand what the bee does . To add that you've incorporated rhyme scheme in it to add to the poetic flavor . Well written.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Wonderful, I'm always impressed by poetry that tells a story . This you have done very well . Anyone can now read this poem and understand what the bee does . To add that you've incorporated rhyme scheme in it to add to the poetic flavor . Well written.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am very much allergic to bee venom and so are several family members. Lots of epi pens. Yet I have many, many pictures as I love them. Go figure. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate the time you take to comment.
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Very welcomed:)
Comment from Mastery
Hi Annie. Your subject matter is unique but by your notes, I can easily understand your need to express your feelings on these little pests.
"I have watched you for an hour
As you zoom from flower to flower
Gathering."
We do enjoy their honey though. Right? Now look out for the "Killer hornets" Yikes! Bob
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Hi Annie. Your subject matter is unique but by your notes, I can easily understand your need to express your feelings on these little pests.
"I have watched you for an hour
As you zoom from flower to flower
Gathering."
We do enjoy their honey though. Right? Now look out for the "Killer hornets" Yikes! Bob
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am very much allergic to bee venom and so are several family members. Lots of epi pens. Yet I have many, many pictures as I love them. Go figure. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate the time you take to comment.
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Take care, Annie, Bob
Comment from Veenbee
Wow, bee stings are serious stuff. I'm glad that everything turned out ok. I really enjoyed your poem. I thought your words drew a very clear picture of what happened to you. I even liked that you asked the bee not to try. Nicely done. Veenbee
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Wow, bee stings are serious stuff. I'm glad that everything turned out ok. I really enjoyed your poem. I thought your words drew a very clear picture of what happened to you. I even liked that you asked the bee not to try. Nicely done. Veenbee
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am very much allergic to bee venom and so are several family members. Lots of epi pens. Yet I have many, many pictures as I love them. Go figure. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate the time you take to comment.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It was nothing like an easy joke or fun, once bees stung you after taking photo of a landscape; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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It was nothing like an easy joke or fun, once bees stung you after taking photo of a landscape; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am very much allergic to bee venom and so are several family members. Lots of epi pens. Yet I have many, many pictures as I love them. Go figure. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate the time you take to comment.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about the fear to be stung by a bee because if an allergy and then got sting after taking a photograph and end up at ER for being stung by a bee.
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about the fear to be stung by a bee because if an allergy and then got sting after taking a photograph and end up at ER for being stung by a bee.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
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I am very much allergic to bee venom and so are several family members. Lots of epi pens. Yet I have many, many pictures as I love them. Go figure. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate the time you take to comment.
Comment from royowen
You must be allergic Annie, have you got that allergy? Was your problem an anaphylactic fit? I like this stylistic post, it's excellent with a an excellent narrative, well done, good job, blessings Roy
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You must be allergic Annie, have you got that allergy? Was your problem an anaphylactic fit? I like this stylistic post, it's excellent with a an excellent narrative, well done, good job, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am very much allergic to bee venom and so are several family members. Lots of epi pens. Yet I have many, many pictures as I love them. Go figure. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate the time you take to comment.
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I?m so sorry, but you?re braves