Autumn seduces
5-7-5 contest entry44 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a short and sweet description of the changing of the guard, in this case summer into fall - fully compliant with the prompt - best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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In my opinion, a short and sweet description of the changing of the guard, in this case summer into fall - fully compliant with the prompt - best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Love the sentiment of the changing of the guard. Thank you for this awesome review, my friend.
God bless!
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Thank you, and you are very welcome indeed. May God bless you as well and keep you and yours safe...Eve
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Thank you, and you are very welcome indeed. May God bless you as well and keep you and yours safe...Eve
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
I really like this poem! You've painted an interesting picture as you compare the trees losing their leaves with a seduced woman/man shedding their clothing.
Exceptional poem!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I really like this poem! You've painted an interesting picture as you compare the trees losing their leaves with a seduced woman/man shedding their clothing.
Exceptional poem!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Susan. My favorite time of the year is fall.
God bless!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ode to autumn. The autumn take over summer and leave the trees naked to prepare for winter. A beautiful tree and an awesome background.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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A very well-written ode to autumn. The autumn take over summer and leave the trees naked to prepare for winter. A beautiful tree and an awesome background.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sandra. I would love to write under that tree.
Good bless!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive, clever poem. Personification and metaphor work well in conveying the message.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive, clever poem. Personification and metaphor work well in conveying the message.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Janice. I certainly enjoy this time of the year.
God bless!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with very good description of the end of the season.
Perfect picture to match the words.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with very good description of the end of the season.
Perfect picture to match the words.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Robert. I love this time of the year.
God bless!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You couldn't have worded that better, and it's happening now. This is a really excellent contest entry for the Ode to Autumn, my favourite season. The colours are stunning and the leaves do try to hold on to their modesty for as long as possible. Well done and good luck. Sandra
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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You couldn't have worded that better, and it's happening now. This is a really excellent contest entry for the Ode to Autumn, my favourite season. The colours are stunning and the leaves do try to hold on to their modesty for as long as possible. Well done and good luck. Sandra
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I love this time of the year as well, Sandra. thank you the awesome review.
God bless!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Autumn seduces", is short, succinct. and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet, has told it as it. To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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"Autumn seduces", is short, succinct. and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet, has told it as it. To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Wow! Thank you, Duchess, for another wonderful review, my friend. Your thoughtful words are far beyond the six stars.
God bless!
Dear Anon,
you deserve the wonderful review.
God bless, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Patty Palmer
Those poor trees go from being pretty then end up bare like they're in a nudist colony! LOL The picture enhances your poem very well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Those poor trees go from being pretty then end up bare like they're in a nudist colony! LOL The picture enhances your poem very well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Right! Thank you for the awesome review, Patty. I love this time of the year.
God Bless!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this clever write as Autumn strips the trees into submission as it prepares them for the long cold winter months, a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed this clever write as Autumn strips the trees into submission as it prepares them for the long cold winter months, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Dolly. I enjoyed the challenge and always enjoy your reviews.
God Bless!
Comment from donette1914
very well done on how Autumn seduces
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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very well done on how Autumn seduces
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you again, somehow this review was duplicated.
God bless!