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Lune poetry

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Comment from Theodore McDowell
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A wonderful, dream-like poem with enchanting word choices and images. It almost feels surreal in its expression. Very well done. Hope all is well with you.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much,Tim, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!

    Melissa
Comment from judiverse
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Lovely artwork choice and presentation. Your words are carefully chosen for the greatest impact. Excellent imagery of the stardust falling and bewitching dreams. Best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Judi, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!

    Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
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Ahhh... This is magical! What a beautiful Lune poem and floats like a lullaby. I see a winner here, my dear! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Sally, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!

    Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a beautiful presentation, Melissa. I love the picture--
perfect for your well thought out and presented lune contest
entry. Great job with the syllable count per line and formatting
the words and lining them up on the left which is recommended
to make the lune shape.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Jan, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!

    Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
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Lovely thought to have stardust "bewitching one's dreams." Great job with your lune taking us from the skies to the eyelashes to the eyes of the mind through dreams. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    Thank you sweet Helen... and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I hope you have enjoyed a lovely day! Also, thank you for the adorable pressed flowers you sent. I am going to use the extras to make my own design and frame it for my bathroom... the colors match. You are so sweet to think of me! Hugs, dear one!

    Melissa
reply by lyenochka on 13-Oct-2022
    Hooray! You got it! 💖💖
    Maybe you can take a picture of your artwork and write a poem about it?
    Thanks for the birthday greetings!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Is that what stardust does? Initiates bewitching dreams? What if you don't want what is being offered? I love the picture so much so I feel my lashes being downloaded with stardust. Hope it is enough.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    Hahaha... you are too funny, Tom. Thank you for a delightful review. :)

    Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
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This lune poem, Magical, has the proper formatting and sends the readers off to have pleasant dreams and wish that the enchantment will enter their lives too.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    Hello Bill. Thanks so much!!

    Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-You wrote a very good lune poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describing the lashes and the dream.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    Hello there Pam. Thanks so much. I am feeling fanciful tonight!! :)

    Melissa
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Oct-2022
    You are very welcome, Melissa.
    😊😊
Comment from jessizero
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I didn't know what a lune poem was, but I looked it up - you have done an excellent job with the prompt! Your poem was mesmerizing. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    Hello Jess. Thank you so very much for your lovely words and review... I'm feeling a bit fanciful tonight :)

    Melissa
Comment from lancellot
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Stardust fell upon
my lashes ~
bewitching my dreams

This is very good and the presentation is excellent. I haven't seen the other entries for this Lune contest, but this will be hard to top.

I bet this is just what the committee is look for.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    Hello!! Thank you so very much for your lovely comments. I am feeling fanciful tonight and thought this would be fun to think about and post :).

    Melissa