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Ben needs prayers.

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Comment from JT traveller
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I will pray for Ben. There are a few grammatical errors, perhaps intentional, "some heath issues...." and "....Please pray for been...."

Great sentiments and a wonderful message. Thank you for sharing, Barbara. Jacqueline xx

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
    I posted it very quickly. I will make corrections. Thank you.
reply by JT traveller on 07-Aug-2023
    Sometimes we just need to get things written down. Thank you for sharing. Bless 🙏
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
    I've made corrections. I had buzzers going off at home that needed my attention, but I wanted to get it out.
reply by JT traveller on 07-Aug-2023
    I hear you. If only we could live without interference. It is late now in Vietnam, flying back to Thailand tomorrow, hopefully for the serenity I need to continue my second novel. Thank you for all your safe advice. Jacqueline xx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
    I will pray for traveling mercies.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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I will join in the prayers. I enjoy the authentic musings of Ben. He is a solid writer.

Hopefully he recovers completely. Thank you for letting us know, Barbara!

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
    Thank you.