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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from Mrs. KT
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Good Lord, Rachelle!
I have no idea where this is going, but I do know that I am certainly going to enjoy the ride!
(A tad bit sad that I wasn't invited to go along; after all, I never get car sick... ever! But I would make folks sick/ill if ever they saw me decked out in a "form-fitting leopard dress, 3-1/2" high heels and broad-brimmed black-and-leopard hat.")
Amish country, eh? Some "Shoo-Fly Pie" on the agenda? Now THAT I can relate to!

Bring on the next chapter!
Fondly,
diane

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Hmmm! I just may give you and your recipe a cameo appearance!! Besides, you don't NEED to go to a FS convention. You'd be one of the keynote speakers!!

    Thanks for the fun review, though. Very much appreciated. xoxo

    PS - Gretchen and I have no idea where it's going, either. We just came up with the idea for it late last night during a spontaneous Facebook messaging time!!
reply by Mrs. KT on 25-Jun-2024
    I don't care where you two are going, I'm just glad to be along on the ride with you two! We definitely need some fun around these parts!
    On to the next installment!

    xoxoxo
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Yes! She's a task-master. She says we're posting again on Thursday!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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When do very good writers get together to collaborate us readers will get the benefit. I can't wait to read more. I read Gretchen's work earlier today. I am absolutely loving this. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Thank you for the nice review!! We came up with this idea quite by accident last night when we were messaging on Facebook! And voila! just like that, we were off and running!! Thanks for coming on board!! xoxxo
Comment from Ulla
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That sounds really.fun..I would love to participate. I think I will. This sounds really fun. You both had your own ideas as how this should pan out. Great fun indeed. Ulla xcx


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Actually, we're going to just keep it between Gretchen and me because we're the two in the car. Sorry, Ulla. Maybe we can think of a way to have a different story be for more writers! xo
reply by Ulla on 25-Jun-2024
    Okay, I understand, lol.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    xo
    So sorry!!
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Love it! I think this is going to be a fun project. I think maybe Thursday night I will post again. Great start. Keep those crazy ideas coming. Love how you wove the backstory and details in. Great, great, great! Gretchen

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Yes! I think this is going to be a hit. xo
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Ah, that's what Gretchen meant when she said "two of us are writing" in reply to my review - two women in a broken-down Suburban.
I read a book where Lawrence Block and Donald Westlake wrote alternating chapters. Westlake introduced a character and Block killed him off in the next chapter. Westlake was not happy.
Great writing, BTW. (smiley face here)

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Hahahahah!! I promise I will NOT be doing that to my beloved co-conspirator!!!