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Reminiscing

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A collection of short stories

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Comment from jmdg1954
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Well I guess the Lord was happy to provide him with urly fries after all. He works in mysterious ways at times. Maybe there was another sign within that entire process?

Cute story. Thanks for sharing.

John

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
    It did teach Steven to pray, so that's a good thing. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Ah well you didn't give in because you didn't go up to the counter yourself. And Steven managed it all by himself...with a little spiritual back-up! Thanks, Barbara, for sharing this enjoyable family memory. Take care Debbie
I (g)ave him a quarter
Andrew and I sho(o)k our heads

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
    I should have edited one more time. Thank you for the help and the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
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The Lord works in mysterious ways...guess he thought Steven needed the curly fries and you kept your word and didn't buy him any. Love the memories.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
    These memories are special. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your story made me smile! I love how Steven's determination turned into such a fun moment. The playful banter between you and Steven was great. Your storytelling has such warmth. The lighthearted ending was perfect.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
    Steven is 31 years old, and our banter continues. I would actually miss it. Thank you for the kind review.