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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from Gayla putnam
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I liked the story, but I loved the poems. They were extremely clever. I can almost visualize your grand entrance, and it's pretty funny. The fanstory convention sounds like a blast. I'll look forward to your "True Story" contest entry. gayla

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Hello, Gayla!
    So pleased you enjoyed.
    What a fun and creative endeavor!

    Thank you!
    fondly,
    diane
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this addition to the story with us. I had fun reading. You did a wonderful job writing this. So far, I have come up with absolutely nothing. My mind is a blank.

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Oh, barb!
    This was no easy feat!
    I learn later today if I have Jury Duty this week; thus, I've been scrambling getting everything done that I need to do for this week and the upcoming Halloween festivities with our grandsons.
    No pressure!
    Hah!
    Loved the challenge.
    All the entrant's versions are spectacular! So creative and fun!

    Thank you for stopping by!
    Glad you enjoyed!
    fondly,
    diane
Comment from Begin Again
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You had quite the fabulous time, didn't you, sweet Diane? But if they left you behind, you must have been blitzed, so do you really know what could have happened? Maybe your story would be different if we bribed a few friends. And that's what you did--left them wanting more. Did the strippers return? Inquisitive minds want to know.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Well, now, Carol,
    Good Catholic-raised girl that I am/was, I would have closed my eyes to the strippers even if I hadn't been soused!
    We just may never know!
    :) :)

    fondly,
    diane
reply by Begin Again on 28-Oct-2024
    That's why I like mysteries! Keep'em guessing. Smiles to you, Carol