Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I am sure that your birthday poem has given her a smile from ear to ear! With she has been through of late, she knows that her friends on this site have her and Wayne in their thoughts and prayers.

I enjoyed the YouTube' oldies but goodies.

Thanks for sharing, sis...
Love ya.
John

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Hi John, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her. So thanks for commenting on that.

Thanks for the very kind comments, my little bro. You do realize you are going to lose that title in a little over a month. Then we will be more like twins. LOL.. Love, Debi

reply by jmdg1954 on 04-Nov-2024

If I were lucky enough to have a twin,
You'd be the first in line,
cuz you're the best that's ever been.

Kind and thoughtful
Always sharing a smile,
With laughter in your heart
Always with pizzazz and style...

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hello Debi,
How do you manage to find everyone's birthday? I'm sure that Rhonda will love the poem you penned for her gal. You're ever so thoughtful.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Hi Tom, most people come to me and ask me to do them. I never ever do a poem for anyone without their permission because a lot of people are so private, you know? But Rhonda and I are friends so I did hers because she has had a rough patch, so I was hoping to cheer her up.

I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

Debi, Firstly another fine birthday poem for a fanstorian. But I think it's time you fessed up. When is your birthday. I think Fanstory should run a contest for a Debi Birthday poem. And you're not eligible to enter. I bet there would be plenty of entries. At the moment I'm in search for words rhyming with debi, of maequette. If you have any ideas, could you please pass them on.


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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Oh Bob, how you crack me up. Remember I told you a few days ago that my birthday was in October and I had 13 poems written for me. So I was kinda overwhelmed but appreciated them.

Anyway, I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Daniel Milton Taylor

Exceptional

Debi, I truly believe this present to Rhonda is "write" on time. She and Wayne can use all the encouragement and medicine of humor that we can give them. You did a great job. Your writing is top notch. I truly enjoyed it. God bless, Daniel

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Daniel, How very sweet of you for saying all those kind things. And it is true, that is why I did it. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

Thanks for the very kind comments and the lovely six stars. So appreciated my dear friends. Love, Debi

reply by Daniel Milton Taylor on 04-Nov-2024

Debi, you are very welcome, and you are most deserving of those 6 stars.
God bless, Daniel

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you so much for celebrating our dear Rhonda! I hope she and Wayne are doing better. Your modified quatern works well with the repeating line using a word that can be rhymed with many others! Smart move! I call it modified because of the fifth stanza you added. Great job!

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024

Helen, I thought I was being kinda clever cause I wrote it in my notes that it started as a qua-tern and ended up as a quad-tern. Hahaha! Thanks, yeah I just wanted to do something different and so I thought adding all those songs as birthday gifts was a good idea. Thanks for the sweet words for it. Love, Debi