Yes You Can
Advise for someone to start believing46 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This has excellent advice and encouragement for someone who has been the victim of abuse, from one who obviously understands. I especially like this line: "dance in your own bright moonlight." Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
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This has excellent advice and encouragement for someone who has been the victim of abuse, from one who obviously understands. I especially like this line: "dance in your own bright moonlight." Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
What a beautiful heartfelt poem about believing you can overcome abuse and challenges in life. It is a moving peace written very well and with great emotion.
Good job, I know your friend will love it. It was very kind of you.
Gypsy
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Hello :)
What a beautiful heartfelt poem about believing you can overcome abuse and challenges in life. It is a moving peace written very well and with great emotion.
Good job, I know your friend will love it. It was very kind of you.
Gypsy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from amada
Wonderful words of inspiration. My fave line "dance in your own bright moonlight." to your own rhythm, to your own music...because we are all different.
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Wonderful words of inspiration. My fave line "dance in your own bright moonlight." to your own rhythm, to your own music...because we are all different.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from ravenblack
"Your problems will have endings/ but the endings you must choose" - so true. The only one who can bring closure to the inner struggle of climbing out of the shadow of abuse is yourself. "Dance in your own bright moonlight"- night no longer dark but lit from within. I hope that the person you are trying to help hears the message. Excellent poem!
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"Your problems will have endings/ but the endings you must choose" - so true. The only one who can bring closure to the inner struggle of climbing out of the shadow of abuse is yourself. "Dance in your own bright moonlight"- night no longer dark but lit from within. I hope that the person you are trying to help hears the message. Excellent poem!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are uplifting, creative and
give good advice. The reader thought about believing before you see (the theme of a book by Wayne Dwyer). The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. Thank you for the author notes.
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are uplifting, creative and
give good advice. The reader thought about believing before you see (the theme of a book by Wayne Dwyer). The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. Thank you for the author notes.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from LanceHill
Very inspirational words to live by. The past cannot be changed but the future is yours to choose. Letting go and letting God lead will allow you the freedom from the past. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
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Very inspirational words to live by. The past cannot be changed but the future is yours to choose. Letting go and letting God lead will allow you the freedom from the past. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from hifein
l like the sentiment. sometimes the rhyming is a little contrived especially in the first stanza (life/strife) (choose/shoes) but essentially a successful poem with the positive energy coming through.
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l like the sentiment. sometimes the rhyming is a little contrived especially in the first stanza (life/strife) (choose/shoes) but essentially a successful poem with the positive energy coming through.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from c_lucas
Give your soul to the Lord, because a-- is stuck on Earth with daily problems to deal with. This is very well written with very good imagery. Good luck in your contest.
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Give your soul to the Lord, because a-- is stuck on Earth with daily problems to deal with. This is very well written with very good imagery. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
This is an absolutely brilliant poem, mystery poet, and it makes me feel like conquering the world, my world anyway. What a wonderful way to encourage others to go ahead and be what they can be, and to do it without expecting others to do it for them. I wish I had a six for this one, my friend, because it deserves that and more!
Rhonda
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This is an absolutely brilliant poem, mystery poet, and it makes me feel like conquering the world, my world anyway. What a wonderful way to encourage others to go ahead and be what they can be, and to do it without expecting others to do it for them. I wish I had a six for this one, my friend, because it deserves that and more!
Rhonda
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from robyn corum
This is a very sweet and wonderfully kind gift for a friend.
Favorite lines:
dance in your own bright moonlight
don't doubt that you'll achieve
rise up and own your moment
all you need is to believe!
Good luck in the contest!
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This is a very sweet and wonderfully kind gift for a friend.
Favorite lines:
dance in your own bright moonlight
don't doubt that you'll achieve
rise up and own your moment
all you need is to believe!
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015