Ode to the Urinal
Response to a challenge from Pantygynt51 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I seen this and laughed because we were just talking about urinals at work yesterday. We have some pretty weird conversations. But this was fun to read and I liked the creativity of it.
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I seen this and laughed because we were just talking about urinals at work yesterday. We have some pretty weird conversations. But this was fun to read and I liked the creativity of it.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Writer51
You not only have a crafty knack to humor, but you have a real talent for writing. I have enjoyed your writing before, and this one is no different.
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You not only have a crafty knack to humor, but you have a real talent for writing. I have enjoyed your writing before, and this one is no different.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from jlsavell
Tony, okay, okay... well you even maje a urinal sound kinda purty in a slapstick poem! I knew one pantygynt said it, it would be birthed in a whizzz!!! Or is that man talk for peeeeeeeee... sound like you have a better rapid transit sytem than here in good ole Houston town!
Well done. Such fun... jimi
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Tony, okay, okay... well you even maje a urinal sound kinda purty in a slapstick poem! I knew one pantygynt said it, it would be birthed in a whizzz!!! Or is that man talk for peeeeeeeee... sound like you have a better rapid transit sytem than here in good ole Houston town!
Well done. Such fun... jimi
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from AnnaLinda
tfawcus,
That's an interesting challenge Pantygnt offered you and an honor as well.
You did a "stand up" job on your poem. Lots of creative imagery and you
even brought us around to a few different countries.
"edifice of steel," > good one! You know, I've never seen one of those
in the US, but I definitely saw them in The Netherlands. We would
freak out here. Still off the boat, I guess.
Very entertaining and talented work,
Linda
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tfawcus,
That's an interesting challenge Pantygnt offered you and an honor as well.
You did a "stand up" job on your poem. Lots of creative imagery and you
even brought us around to a few different countries.
"edifice of steel," > good one! You know, I've never seen one of those
in the US, but I definitely saw them in The Netherlands. We would
freak out here. Still off the boat, I guess.
Very entertaining and talented work,
Linda
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
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Wow, six stars! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Bill O'Bier
A great poem for needed relief. You did a wonderful tribute to ceramic shrine. The arrangement of your words are expressive. Also the pairing with the artwork fits well. Thanks for sharing this fun piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
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A great poem for needed relief. You did a wonderful tribute to ceramic shrine. The arrangement of your words are expressive. Also the pairing with the artwork fits well. Thanks for sharing this fun piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Pantygynt was right, it is beautiful... beautiful in the sense that it is beautifully funny. It is cleverly worded as always, Tony. In fact it is brilliant and I love it. Giddy
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Pantygynt was right, it is beautiful... beautiful in the sense that it is beautifully funny. It is cleverly worded as always, Tony. In fact it is brilliant and I love it. Giddy
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
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Wow, six stars! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from djsaxon
Pantygynt was correct. Very clever and very funny. It gets better with each read :-), and now 'je vais aux pissoir' - too many cups of tea. DJ
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Pantygynt was correct. Very clever and very funny. It gets better with each read :-), and now 'je vais aux pissoir' - too many cups of tea. DJ
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. We aim to please! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Javed05
This is a good write up about urinal. Interesting topic. it flows smoothly .creates good imagery.I like the language used in this piece.as it is engaging.thank you for sharing your work
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This is a good write up about urinal. Interesting topic. it flows smoothly .creates good imagery.I like the language used in this piece.as it is engaging.thank you for sharing your work
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from sandy montgomery
Skillful, humorous, entertaining yes...beautiful? Hmm I really liked it though. I'd say you rose to the challenge. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Skillful, humorous, entertaining yes...beautiful? Hmm I really liked it though. I'd say you rose to the challenge. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great tribute to a necessary piece of equipment. You write this funny poem with a lot of talent. I feel like I have been on a European tour.
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A great tribute to a necessary piece of equipment. You write this funny poem with a lot of talent. I feel like I have been on a European tour.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it and appreciated the humour. Best wishes, Tony