Smity's Forty Niner
How much power can an ego have?33 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I must admit if ahead was clear, why could you see the headlines, "six students bead on 125!" I suppose that's the way it ends! Probably clean up the ending, and I think it could be a great entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo slam on his (breaks) brakes? 2: Glenn was still (a head) ahead? 3 both cars would (surly) die. Surely?
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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I must admit if ahead was clear, why could you see the headlines, "six students bead on 125!" I suppose that's the way it ends! Probably clean up the ending, and I think it could be a great entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo slam on his (breaks) brakes? 2: Glenn was still (a head) ahead? 3 both cars would (surly) die. Surely?
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Royowen,
They are having an out of the body experiences?
gsnewton77
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Could be? Hah hah
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It was an out of body experience
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Well done,
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good contest entry. I used to say I didn't do well in contests, but I can't say that anymore. I won the last one I entered.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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A very good contest entry. I used to say I didn't do well in contests, but I can't say that anymore. I won the last one I entered.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Hi Thomas,
Thank you for your comment and congratulations on your win.
Regards, gsnewton75
Comment from Poetic Friend
Oh my, I was not expecting the horrific twist at the end. I got the chills when I read the last sentence. I was beginning to connect with the characters.
This story brings awareness of the dangers of drag racing in the name of fun, adrenaline, and dares. Also, the characters, plots and scenery were well-developed.
Wow, you wrote a great story. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Oh my, I was not expecting the horrific twist at the end. I got the chills when I read the last sentence. I was beginning to connect with the characters.
This story brings awareness of the dangers of drag racing in the name of fun, adrenaline, and dares. Also, the characters, plots and scenery were well-developed.
Wow, you wrote a great story. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Nice review. I was glad you included some of the writing elements in your review.
Thanks for the comments. i appreciate your compliment.
Cordially, gsnewton57