Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi CD,
Well I guess he got what asked for. This is such a good story.
I like how it began and the ending was just perfect. I also liked the little poem Zelda recited. That was very clever. You have a great imagination.
Good luck in the contest.
Brenda.x

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thanks so much for the lovely comments and good wishes, Brenda. Both are much appreciated. Craig

Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

Hum, sometimes we get things we don't really wish for wow did he ever goof on this one for sure. He sure didn't think this threw did he before spouting off.

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Haha, nope, he sure didn't give it enough thought. Thanks so much for the great comments and the delightful rating. Cheers, Craig

reply by country ranch writer on 28-Oct-2019

Hehe

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is an interesting entry for teh Halloween flash Fiction contest.
You have an interesting twist for an ending.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thanks very much for the kind comments and good wishes. Craig