Autumn seduces
5-7-5 contest entry44 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Wow, this is a 5-7-5 that is very much to the point and with the perfect photo as well, softening the statement of being exposed. All kinds of great 's' alliteration with seduces, summer, submission. I'd like to go read a good poetry book under that tree!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Wow, this is a 5-7-5 that is very much to the point and with the perfect photo as well, softening the statement of being exposed. All kinds of great 's' alliteration with seduces, summer, submission. I'd like to go read a good poetry book under that tree!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Yes, the tree is definitely inviting. Thank you for the awesome review, Crystie.
God Bless!
Comment from Eternal Muse
I loved it. This poem and your imagery made me miss autumnal East Coast. There are no real seasons here in Nevada. Excellent visuals and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I loved it. This poem and your imagery made me miss autumnal East Coast. There are no real seasons here in Nevada. Excellent visuals and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Eternal Muse. Always enjoy your reviews. We get hot and then cool here in South Texas. Not much in between.
God bless
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! It captures the heart of fall. I especially like the first line because it conveys the passion of autumn.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug! Rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! It captures the heart of fall. I especially like the first line because it conveys the passion of autumn.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug! Rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Rebekka, I always love reading your reviews. This six star review has certainly brightened my evening.
God bless!
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My pleasure entirely dear anonymous <3
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Raul, for this most excellent review, my friend.
God bless!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very nice ode to autumn. Explains transitioning to autumn so well. A Beautiful visual to go with your words. Autumn seduces summer into submission. Nudity exposed.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is a very nice ode to autumn. Explains transitioning to autumn so well. A Beautiful visual to go with your words. Autumn seduces summer into submission. Nudity exposed.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Joanne. This is my favorite time of the year.
God bless.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a great poem for the Ode Autumn. It is funny and the similes are appropriate. It's good that it is a Haiku with limited word count.
Exceptional.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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What a great poem for the Ode Autumn. It is funny and the similes are appropriate. It's good that it is a Haiku with limited word count.
Exceptional.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Lisa, for this exceptional review, my friend. I am happy this one has been so well received.
God bless!
Comment from Tina Crute
This poem makes me see a relationship between Autumn and Summer that I never considered before! I love getting surprised like that. This is a very creative entry!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This poem makes me see a relationship between Autumn and Summer that I never considered before! I love getting surprised like that. This is a very creative entry!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Tina. I always appreciate your inspiring reviews.
God bless!
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You are welcome:)
Comment from equestrik
This is a very clever write as an ode to Autumn. Suddenly it is that time of year again! it is still pretty hot during the days here but nights are colder making for good leaf colors in the mountains.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This is a very clever write as an ode to Autumn. Suddenly it is that time of year again! it is still pretty hot during the days here but nights are colder making for good leaf colors in the mountains.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Same on this end. We have a longer fall, short spring here. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Earl Corp
An excellent entry into the lode to autumn contest. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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An excellent entry into the lode to autumn contest. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Earl. Have a blessed and safe day.
Comment from amada
I like your haiku a lot. Autumn is shining full and well in our fanstory members. I like the line about the nakedness of this season; this is a great observation. i wish you the best in this contest prompt.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I like your haiku a lot. Autumn is shining full and well in our fanstory members. I like the line about the nakedness of this season; this is a great observation. i wish you the best in this contest prompt.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review and support, Amada. My favorite time of the year.
God bless.