War Free World
4 Line Poem 2 4 4 12 Syllable Dedicated to Wise Men to Act 444 total reviews
Comment from Rena Smith
I am in agreement because God can do anything He wants accept tell a lie. God is not going to do anything wrong but He could destroy the world with one word if He so desires but He can also give us peace. I agree that God is not going to do something just because we think He should because He works on His own terms.
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I am in agreement because God can do anything He wants accept tell a lie. God is not going to do anything wrong but He could destroy the world with one word if He so desires but He can also give us peace. I agree that God is not going to do something just because we think He should because He works on His own terms.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Jane Jane King
This poem really hits home for me, primarily because of its simple message and the sincerity which drives the choice of words. God wants peace. Some people, unfortunately do not.
Thanks for sharing this message with us and good luck in the contest.
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This poem really hits home for me, primarily because of its simple message and the sincerity which drives the choice of words. God wants peace. Some people, unfortunately do not.
Thanks for sharing this message with us and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
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Comment from oliver818
Great message. This poem tells us about the way we should act- peacefully and not in a belligerent way. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day. Better luck next time with the competition.
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Great message. This poem tells us about the way we should act- peacefully and not in a belligerent way. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day. Better luck next time with the competition.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from kahpot
"World Peace" so easy to write-so hard to right, unfortunately, it only takes a doubt of God's intention to start these horrific events, you have sent a powerful message in so few words, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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"World Peace" so easy to write-so hard to right, unfortunately, it only takes a doubt of God's intention to start these horrific events, you have sent a powerful message in so few words, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2022