Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "What Is My Love?"My book of poems and stories
58 total reviews
Comment from pickthorn
A poem that expresses your love for someone special. Well crafted with some great lines. This one I like a lot:
"He offers strength and love that
stirs my inner being and brings
forth hope almost forgotten."
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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A poem that expresses your love for someone special. Well crafted with some great lines. This one I like a lot:
"He offers strength and love that
stirs my inner being and brings
forth hope almost forgotten."
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you very much for your most welcome review. I appreciate your showing what you liked in my poem.
Comment from Martin Chan
A good romance poetry What is my Love is written with a good imagination and nice choice of words.Written in free verse form, the poem has a nice presentation
and on a good subject of love.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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A good romance poetry What is my Love is written with a good imagination and nice choice of words.Written in free verse form, the poem has a nice presentation
and on a good subject of love.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you so very much for you most welcome review.
Comment from amanda98653
A very lovely poem you've written there.
"He is a smile begetting a smile,
bringing forth laughter too long
suppressed." a very lovely metaphor, a bittersweet feeling
Favorite lines- "He is the freedom of the sparrow
never to be caged. "
Not born to be a slave, but a man who lives with liberty.
"He resembles the elements. Thunder,
lightening, a raging storm, yet
softness like a summer breeze that
touches me with gentle fingers."
the ambivalence toward who he is. Harsh or soft..
Very good use of the word "Thunder"- frightening, destructive
and the opposing element "softness like a summer breeze"- very good use of simile there
"He is a song without words creating
joy. "- A song that goes on and on
Amanda
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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A very lovely poem you've written there.
"He is a smile begetting a smile,
bringing forth laughter too long
suppressed." a very lovely metaphor, a bittersweet feeling
Favorite lines- "He is the freedom of the sparrow
never to be caged. "
Not born to be a slave, but a man who lives with liberty.
"He resembles the elements. Thunder,
lightening, a raging storm, yet
softness like a summer breeze that
touches me with gentle fingers."
the ambivalence toward who he is. Harsh or soft..
Very good use of the word "Thunder"- frightening, destructive
and the opposing element "softness like a summer breeze"- very good use of simile there
"He is a song without words creating
joy. "- A song that goes on and on
Amanda
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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What a great review! Thank you so much Amanda. I really appreciate the time and effort you took in reviewing my poem.
Comment from emjaihammond
This poetry is very tender and sweet and quite expressive as well. Your verses are well written with a good sense of rhythm and understanding of the things that make poetry work. It seems to be a natural talent.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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This poetry is very tender and sweet and quite expressive as well. Your verses are well written with a good sense of rhythm and understanding of the things that make poetry work. It seems to be a natural talent.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for the time you have taken to write a review for my poetry.
Comment from weemick1960
And he cometh with Angel's whispering fingers. His smile comes forth like the light of Heaven. I really enjoyed this, the gentle flow, the simple words of joy and Love, it virtually sings off the page. Well done on this write. He is out there and one day two ships shall not pass in the night and you shall find each other. Walk in the light of Love...MIKE.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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And he cometh with Angel's whispering fingers. His smile comes forth like the light of Heaven. I really enjoyed this, the gentle flow, the simple words of joy and Love, it virtually sings off the page. Well done on this write. He is out there and one day two ships shall not pass in the night and you shall find each other. Walk in the light of Love...MIKE.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you Mike for the time you took to write your review for my poem. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This well-written, appealing "definition" of your love is one of the most creative I've read. I especially like the lines about "endless waves," which imaginatively describe his uniqueness!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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This well-written, appealing "definition" of your love is one of the most creative I've read. I especially like the lines about "endless waves," which imaginatively describe his uniqueness!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thanks Janice for your wonderful review of my poem. I really appreciate the time and effort you took in writing it.
Comment from robina1978
What a beautiful love poem you wrote here in free verse form. You compare him with many elements of the weather, storm and more gentle. A metaphor I think in the last stanza. Sorry, I have no six left.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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What a beautiful love poem you wrote here in free verse form. You compare him with many elements of the weather, storm and more gentle. A metaphor I think in the last stanza. Sorry, I have no six left.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thanks so very much for your review. I really appreciate the time you took to review my poem.
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I liked it, Ine
Comment from TXANG1128
He sounds wonderful.. Very well written..
Poems about love are my favorites.. thanks for writing.
Very Descriptive..Angela
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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He sounds wonderful.. Very well written..
Poems about love are my favorites.. thanks for writing.
Very Descriptive..Angela
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the review and the time you took to do it. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Bayberry
This is beautifully written from the heart. It has a soothing flow that lines up well with the theme. If you can find him for real, you'll be a very blessed person. :>
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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This is beautifully written from the heart. It has a soothing flow that lines up well with the theme. If you can find him for real, you'll be a very blessed person. :>
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thanks for your review and your time. I hope I find him also. Thanks again.
Comment from CR Delport
You have reviewed mine so I am returning the favor. This is a nice love poem for a special person. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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You have reviewed mine so I am returning the favor. This is a nice love poem for a special person. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Than you so much for your review. I do appreciate the time you have taken to review my poem.