What is love
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Comment from Air Spirit
A unique form, with a universal message. You have given multiple definitions of what love is --- and show that love is multi-dimensional, with different layers and different types of love... love for a friend, child, spouse, parents, writing, music, sports, food, etc. etc., etc. One of my favorite lines, which I feel touches upon love's essence is "...Love is- grown then spread around..." because love is a living expression of our affection and what we hold in our hearts -- your analogy of love spreading is so true, because it is something that is alive, grows inside of us, and can't help but spill out to share with others... true love cannot be self-contained, because by it's nature, it grows, multiplies and never divides... excellent poem and exposé on love...
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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A unique form, with a universal message. You have given multiple definitions of what love is --- and show that love is multi-dimensional, with different layers and different types of love... love for a friend, child, spouse, parents, writing, music, sports, food, etc. etc., etc. One of my favorite lines, which I feel touches upon love's essence is "...Love is- grown then spread around..." because love is a living expression of our affection and what we hold in our hearts -- your analogy of love spreading is so true, because it is something that is alive, grows inside of us, and can't help but spill out to share with others... true love cannot be self-contained, because by it's nature, it grows, multiplies and never divides... excellent poem and exposé on love...
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Wow! I have just learned what I was trying to accomplish, you have put my words in so much more perspective, you are wonderful ( a FUN question) why didn't you write this before I posted? You have definitely given me something to work on which I love many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Senyai
Hello again, Kahpot! I would say this is an improved post because your words are excellent descriptions of love in all its facets. I did not see the original but enjoyed your re-edited work here.
Your last lines are an omen, leave love out of the equation and you will reap a bitter harvest!
Well done,
Lynn
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Hello again, Kahpot! I would say this is an improved post because your words are excellent descriptions of love in all its facets. I did not see the original but enjoyed your re-edited work here.
Your last lines are an omen, leave love out of the equation and you will reap a bitter harvest!
Well done,
Lynn
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Old Soldier
Love is 12 points :). No just having fun. Nice poem about how love is much more then saying I love you. Nice job. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading and reviewing
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Love is 12 points :). No just having fun. Nice poem about how love is much more then saying I love you. Nice job. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading and reviewing
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Hello my Friend and wouldn't it be nice if there were only 12 points thanks for making me smile and for your great review****kahpot
Comment from Artasylum
Hey kiddo... love is also poetry in motion, love is life's secret potion; love is way to much work; love is mine to wholly pluck. I think you did a wonderful job and I wouldn't change a thing. yours, diana
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Hey kiddo... love is also poetry in motion, love is life's secret potion; love is way to much work; love is mine to wholly pluck. I think you did a wonderful job and I wouldn't change a thing. yours, diana
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, " Love is life's secret potion" very well said, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Brigitte Elko
I loved this poem with its repetition of "love is". Love you described is as it should be. Excellent in my opinion and I had not read it previously. The image you chose is an attribute for your verbiage.
Have a safe 4th of July.
Brigitte
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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I loved this poem with its repetition of "love is". Love you described is as it should be. Excellent in my opinion and I had not read it previously. The image you chose is an attribute for your verbiage.
Have a safe 4th of July.
Brigitte
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Wow! thank you, you have just told me that I am learning and improving, many thanks****kahpot
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I have replied I am just trying
Comment from sheena121
A very nice romantic poem, I like how it rhymes. Well written and well thought out and has a feeling of happiness to it. A pleasure to read.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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A very nice romantic poem, I like how it rhymes. Well written and well thought out and has a feeling of happiness to it. A pleasure to read.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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Thank yyou very much for your time and review****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is a very beautiful and expressive poem on love. Great job my friend. Hope you have a Happy Easter. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kerry~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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This is a very beautiful and expressive poem on love. Great job my friend. Hope you have a Happy Easter. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kerry~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Kerry and happy easter to you and yours****kahpot
Comment from honeytree
Great art work
for these words written
Love is so special and important
within our lives, living would be
difficult without it.
The word love should stand out
within our lives.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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Great art work
for these words written
Love is so special and important
within our lives, living would be
difficult without it.
The word love should stand out
within our lives.
Honeytree
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much love is very important****kahpot
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I like your love poem very much. You describe love very well. The illustration you chose is excellent and goes well with your very charming poem. Included as you did about work, is a good idea. The many ways of knowing and cherishing love is evident in this excellent poem.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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I like your love poem very much. You describe love very well. The illustration you chose is excellent and goes well with your very charming poem. Included as you did about work, is a good idea. The many ways of knowing and cherishing love is evident in this excellent poem.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Thank you for an excellent review and yes work must be there****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, love is truth without a lie. And the world is a better place for it - if only we would remember to live by it. If we sow seeds of love, we will reap so much in return. Your poem sums it all up very nicely. Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Yes, love is truth without a lie. And the world is a better place for it - if only we would remember to live by it. If we sow seeds of love, we will reap so much in return. Your poem sums it all up very nicely. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thank you very much****kahpot