Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "love upon desert sands"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Pyrrho
Your illustration looks like it was created for Omar Khayyam
's Rubaiyat. However the verse is another romantic love + a tad of erotica shaken and stirred, but quite well constructed with excellent word choice..
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Your illustration looks like it was created for Omar Khayyam
's Rubaiyat. However the verse is another romantic love + a tad of erotica shaken and stirred, but quite well constructed with excellent word choice..
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from c_lucas
In Islam, only married couples under Allah can kiss on the lips. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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In Islam, only married couples under Allah can kiss on the lips. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you Mr C
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie