Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

A simple and direct way of saying what you had to say. There are only three days; yesterday, today and tomorrow. I think you brought that message home well.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Thanks alot for your encouragement and great review. I am truly glad that it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Hello, DaGirl. I like the creativity of this contest entry.
And it has a wonderful spiritual meaning, which is not easy to get across in a short poem of this style. Well done! Bev

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Thanks alot for your encouragement and great review. I am truly glad that it makes sense to you.
My Regards

reply by Writingfundimension on 29-Apr-2012

You're very welcome! Bev

Comment from percival86jack

Excellent

Very well said! It's obvious when we see it written but in our everyday life, we don't think that much about it! Today is yesterday's tomorrow! Good luck... hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Thanks alot for your encouragement and great review. I am truly glad that it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

Hello DaGirl and welcome to the site; I thank you for sharing your profound, thought provoking verse and I agree with the theme, we must learn from our yesterdays to make our tomorrows better.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012

Thanks so much for the kind comments & great review. I am truly glad it makes sense to you.
Regards

Comment from PeaceLoveLina

Excellent

I LOVE IT!!! WOW!!! THIS POEM DESCRIBES...ME!!!! My favorite quote is "Don't let the past ruin your future" and this poem gives a different view of the past!!! It gives me knowledge of how one quote leads to another. THANK YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL HAIKU!!!
P.S.I'm 13!!!My aunt, LilHippie, started on this site on Dr.. Martin Luther King Junior's birthday, and I started yesterday. I LOVE reading and writing!!! WE LOVE YOU ALREADY! Talented, pretty, and smart! We'll be good friends!!! I also want you to read her poems, along with one of mine on her page called, "Join Me", and my first on my own profile page. Thanks again, love your work,
Angelina

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012

Wow! Thank you Angelina. I am glad it got you all excited and marvel at your remarkable sense of self at the age of 13.
Really, you must have great plans for your future and how i pray that they all be, for your happiness.
You are also kind for talking about your aunt. I will check out your work and your aunt's. Promise.
Just look out for my review in about 24 hrs 'cause its bedtime where i am.
Your good friend 'DaGirl.

reply by PeaceLoveLina on 28-Apr-2012

Thanks! Looking forward to it :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, dagirl, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the way we choose our destination by the map we follow. i enjoyed reading it, very deep, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012

Thanks! For your kind comments, wishes and great review. I am truly glad it made sense to you.
Regards

Comment from Bina1

Excellent

A very nice write. Your notes really enhance the story. I know a few college students that could use a few reads of this! Thank you for sharing. Keep going for your dream!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012

Thanks a lot for your comments and great review! I am truly glad that it makes sense to you!
Regards

Comment from Doc Holiday

Excellent

Keep you gas tank full
and your dreams alive!

Welcome to FS!

Nice write!

Good 5-7-5 poem...
Have a great night, Doc!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012

Thanks a lot for your comments and great review! I am truly glad that it makes sense to you!
Regards

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

This poem just made me smile. I loved the poetic nature and the truth in it. It is a very original thoughts process for such a very short piece of poetic art... John

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012

Thanks alot for the smile, the comments and great review. I am truly glad it makes sense to you.
Regards

Comment from Crackerberries

Excellent

It certainly meets the standard for a 5-7-5 poem. I'm not so sure I totally understand how the fueling from yesterday will make tomorrow because yesterday is gone we can't get it back ever... the only thing we can do is change what is right now. That is what should drive your tomorrow. But good luck with your writing.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012

Thanks! Though i figure life has multi-dimensions to it and i totally agree with your way of thinking.
However, this is used relating to the mechanism behind driving a car. The filling of your tank yesterday (when you started the journey)guarantees how far you have gone today and hopeful you can get to your destination tomorrow (not considering that real fuel finishes)..
I think i will add some lines along these thoughts to my notes.
Thanks alot!