Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "No Such Thing As Angels"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
121 total reviews
Comment from justafan
Spellbinding. I love it! I am glad I ventured into poems today and found this work of art. I don't think "talented" is a big enough adjective to use about you Mr. West. I know I have been profuse with my compliments but, I mean them all. I will say again...I loved it!
Always,
Justafan
Missy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Spellbinding. I love it! I am glad I ventured into poems today and found this work of art. I don't think "talented" is a big enough adjective to use about you Mr. West. I know I have been profuse with my compliments but, I mean them all. I will say again...I loved it!
Always,
Justafan
Missy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you kindly for your comments and your support. I really do appreciate them very much. I have more coming as well. So stay tuned. And, a, Mr. West was my dearly beloved Dad. I'm just Brett.
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Comment from Donovan
I am not a real fan of country music, so if you like this, I think that is all that matters. The story is easy to follow and the meaning is not hidden in gobbledygook. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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I am not a real fan of country music, so if you like this, I think that is all that matters. The story is easy to follow and the meaning is not hidden in gobbledygook. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. I enjoyed this writing.
See was over in the corner when I came home tonight.
once again Jack Daniels helped me see the light.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angles but I got one here with me.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Excellent poem. I enjoyed this writing.
See was over in the corner when I came home tonight.
once again Jack Daniels helped me see the light.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angles but I got one here with me.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.
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thank you!
Comment from I am Cat
"They say there's no such thing as angels, well, my woman's wearing wings.
She's the rock that I still lean on. The gold inside our wedding rings.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angels but I got one here with me."
Absolutely! I love this chorus... makes me want to sing (trust me, you don't want me to) :(
I have a few poems that i've often thought would make good country songs (one of them actually was)... you're a storyteller, and I find that so intriguing!
For me, touching others with our words is the best feeling in the world, and I can tell that it is for you as well.
Thanks for sharing so much of yourself.
Cat
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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"They say there's no such thing as angels, well, my woman's wearing wings.
She's the rock that I still lean on. The gold inside our wedding rings.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angels but I got one here with me."
Absolutely! I love this chorus... makes me want to sing (trust me, you don't want me to) :(
I have a few poems that i've often thought would make good country songs (one of them actually was)... you're a storyteller, and I find that so intriguing!
For me, touching others with our words is the best feeling in the world, and I can tell that it is for you as well.
Thanks for sharing so much of yourself.
Cat
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Writing Country music song lyrics is my passion. I do enjoy it and sharing them with others. I never thought I would find the kind of success and support I have had on this site. All you all make me want to keep right on writing and posting them.
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And I know I speak for the rest of the members when I say.... I certainly look forward to reading them!
Cat
Comment from Dean Kuch
Alcoholism is the scourge of many loving, caring families and relationships, there's no doubt about it, Brett. No addiction is healthy, but alcohol affects not just the one getting drunk, but often times the families involved as well.
These lyrics are extremely well written. Me being a country music fan from way back, I've always appreciated the moral values and messages many country songs impart. These catchy lyrics are certainly no exception.
Great work, and congratulations on all of your All-Time Bests...~Dean
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Alcoholism is the scourge of many loving, caring families and relationships, there's no doubt about it, Brett. No addiction is healthy, but alcohol affects not just the one getting drunk, but often times the families involved as well.
These lyrics are extremely well written. Me being a country music fan from way back, I've always appreciated the moral values and messages many country songs impart. These catchy lyrics are certainly no exception.
Great work, and congratulations on all of your All-Time Bests...~Dean
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and continued support. Really do appreciate them indeed.
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Just keep up the great work, Brett. I wish you the best of luck in all of your future endeavors, my friend...~Dean ;}
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This is an extremely beautiful post and it makes me feel warm inside. There are indeed angels here on earth who make life worthwhile. However, there are also devils. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This is an extremely beautiful post and it makes me feel warm inside. There are indeed angels here on earth who make life worthwhile. However, there are also devils. :-)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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These Country music song lyrics are my pride and joy work of all writings I have ever created. Apprecite your comments and support about them.
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Well done
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem shows the woman's love and perseverance. It also shows the man's love.
But I see no lyrics about him stopping drinking as you say he does in your notes.
It is a well beginning and middle but I think you need another verse to complete the story.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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This poem shows the woman's love and perseverance. It also shows the man's love.
But I see no lyrics about him stopping drinking as you say he does in your notes.
It is a well beginning and middle but I think you need another verse to complete the story.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments.
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Any time.
dragonpoet
Comment from mfowler
These are good lyrics for Country and Western.
I tried to sing them to a simple C&W beat and that was pretty good. Since I'm not musically inclined, the fact that it worked for me says it's going to work with a proper score.
The story is very clear and the sentiments of twisted drunken soul and a loyal, admiring attitude to the long suffering wife, fits the genre perfectly. There's a story to be shared and emotion to underpin the plot. Loved the chorus. Really catchy and perfect for this.
They say there's no such thing as angels, well, my woman's wearing wings.
She's the rock that I still lean on. The gold inside our wedding rings.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angels but I got one here with me. ..
Yeah, very nice.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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These are good lyrics for Country and Western.
I tried to sing them to a simple C&W beat and that was pretty good. Since I'm not musically inclined, the fact that it worked for me says it's going to work with a proper score.
The story is very clear and the sentiments of twisted drunken soul and a loyal, admiring attitude to the long suffering wife, fits the genre perfectly. There's a story to be shared and emotion to underpin the plot. Loved the chorus. Really catchy and perfect for this.
They say there's no such thing as angels, well, my woman's wearing wings.
She's the rock that I still lean on. The gold inside our wedding rings.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angels but I got one here with me. ..
Yeah, very nice.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and continued support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from petalangela
It would appear I have become a fan of your lyrics reading back on your list I think in fact I KNOW I have reviewed three previous posts.
This one is the best so far,
I hope music will be added to your muse
Petal
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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It would appear I have become a fan of your lyrics reading back on your list I think in fact I KNOW I have reviewed three previous posts.
This one is the best so far,
I hope music will be added to your muse
Petal
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and continued support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from Hareem.S
You have wrote about a good strong marital bond where two imperfect people love each other. I loved reading this well written poem.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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You have wrote about a good strong marital bond where two imperfect people love each other. I loved reading this well written poem.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.