5/7/5 (Leaves in Fright)
Leaves float back to tree, so frightened.121 total reviews
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice 5-7-5 poem for Halloween. Has the correct syllable count for each line. Has a nice colorful picture to accompany the poem.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This is a nice 5-7-5 poem for Halloween. Has the correct syllable count for each line. Has a nice colorful picture to accompany the poem.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
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You're welcome,
Dennis
Comment from Janet Foor
Delightful and clever Halloween poem. Great picture to enhance your words. It actually looks like the leaves are jumping back on the trees.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Delightful and clever Halloween poem. Great picture to enhance your words. It actually looks like the leaves are jumping back on the trees.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from rightforyou
Wow...this poem is so wonderful..I would post it on the front page for all to read and review....I would also enter it in the halloween poem contest....never know, may just win ....good luck..Ron
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Wow...this poem is so wonderful..I would post it on the front page for all to read and review....I would also enter it in the halloween poem contest....never know, may just win ....good luck..Ron
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thanks so much.
Comment from mermaids
I like the image of leaves being frightened and jumping back onto the trees. This is a unique poem that creates the leaves as a character.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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I like the image of leaves being frightened and jumping back onto the trees. This is a unique poem that creates the leaves as a character.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well, now that would definitely be a very interesting sight to behold, might even freak one out. Good poem. God loves you and we do too.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Well, now that would definitely be a very interesting sight to behold, might even freak one out. Good poem. God loves you and we do too.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from krys123
Much gratitude to you author for sharing this wonderful haiku with fans, myself and other readers/writers. A very well done haiku, and very explicit and very poignant. The imagery and the color is fantastic but you know I true haiku does not have a picture however yours complements your poem and vice a versa. Good luck in the contest. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Much gratitude to you author for sharing this wonderful haiku with fans, myself and other readers/writers. A very well done haiku, and very explicit and very poignant. The imagery and the color is fantastic but you know I true haiku does not have a picture however yours complements your poem and vice a versa. Good luck in the contest. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much.
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You are so welcome and you wrote a very beautiful poem
Comment from Charlene0513
A perfect picture to address the withered and soiled look of leaves at there worst.
Very nice flow.
Charlene
Up against snow they don't stand a chance.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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A perfect picture to address the withered and soiled look of leaves at there worst.
Very nice flow.
Charlene
Up against snow they don't stand a chance.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is an ironic event that can show what true terror can cause.
You can make it rhyme and still keep the syllable count if you change eve to night.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This is an ironic event that can show what true terror can cause.
You can make it rhyme and still keep the syllable count if you change eve to night.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from Brocha1
very effective use of the 5-7-5.
The first two lines set the mood very well.. The first line set the time, whilst the second line jumped straight into the feeling of the fright. the only thing that didn't feel quite right was fright being raw.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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very effective use of the 5-7-5.
The first two lines set the mood very well.. The first line set the time, whilst the second line jumped straight into the feeling of the fright. the only thing that didn't feel quite right was fright being raw.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Your meat can be raw; your nerves can be raw, the fright is painful and urgent - raw. Always looking to find words to describe overly used words and phrases. Try it some time! And, thanks for reading.