Long Fallen Crisp Leaves
5/7/5 Autumn Haiku11 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written 5-7-5 Haiku. Such beautiful
Wording. And the photo you have chosen is very breathtaking works well with your words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written 5-7-5 Haiku. Such beautiful
Wording. And the photo you have chosen is very breathtaking works well with your words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Joanne.. Have a joyful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Minglement
Wow. wish I had a sixer left for this excellent 5-7-5 Writing prompt entry. It flows so smoothly and fulfills the promise of haiku. Your last line is infinitely satisfying ;) Well, done my friend - Marcia
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Wow. wish I had a sixer left for this excellent 5-7-5 Writing prompt entry. It flows so smoothly and fulfills the promise of haiku. Your last line is infinitely satisfying ;) Well, done my friend - Marcia
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for the lovely review. Have a great weekend.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a cool choice of word here: 'ardent'... love the emotion that adds to your imagery! :) :) A wonderful offering in only seventeen syllables here - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
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Such a cool choice of word here: 'ardent'... love the emotion that adds to your imagery! :) :) A wonderful offering in only seventeen syllables here - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the fallen crisp leaves rustling in the northern whirlwind ardent breaking down for the coming winter season.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the fallen crisp leaves rustling in the northern whirlwind ardent breaking down for the coming winter season.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Cheers,
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of the literary techniques will draw the reader in. You also create an onomatopoetic effect with your s's. Some of your words are onomatopoetic also. The reader will be drawn to identify the experience, some sadly, only vicariously. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Your use of the literary techniques will draw the reader in. You also create an onomatopoetic effect with your s's. Some of your words are onomatopoetic also. The reader will be drawn to identify the experience, some sadly, only vicariously. Well expressed.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I get a picture of leaves, brown and maybe a still a little golden, swirling around in the wind. Like a tornado of leaves, as dawn approaches in the sky.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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I get a picture of leaves, brown and maybe a still a little golden, swirling around in the wind. Like a tornado of leaves, as dawn approaches in the sky.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was the most beautiful autumnal poem. It had terrific imagery and visuals; I also loved your artistic presentation, the artwork and that big font, which appeased these eyes (smile).
This should do very well in the contest; good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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That was the most beautiful autumnal poem. It had terrific imagery and visuals; I also loved your artistic presentation, the artwork and that big font, which appeased these eyes (smile).
This should do very well in the contest; good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Long Fallen Crisp Leaves, has the proper formatting and creates the picture of falls fury and the dead leaves caught up in the times.
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This 5-7-5, Long Fallen Crisp Leaves, has the proper formatting and creates the picture of falls fury and the dead leaves caught up in the times.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Comment from lyenochka
I love the sounds of your poem from the sound of "crisp" and "rustle" and " whirlwind" which all helps us to hear th autumnal wind breaking the dawn. Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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I love the sounds of your poem from the sound of "crisp" and "rustle" and " whirlwind" which all helps us to hear th autumnal wind breaking the dawn. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Wow, thank you for excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it.
Hugs
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is a nice Haiku poem for the contest, The artwork works very well and adds a lot to the visualization of the poem.
I can't think of anything to make it better.
Good luck.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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This is a nice Haiku poem for the contest, The artwork works very well and adds a lot to the visualization of the poem.
I can't think of anything to make it better.
Good luck.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
