Long Fallen Crisp Leaves
5/7/5 Autumn Haiku11 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
You have a vivid use of words that captures well the impact of Autumn. "Long fallen crisp leaves" is a line that draws the reader into your poem and appeals to the senses. The reader sees the leaves and feels the crunch of fallen leaves. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic flow of lines.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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You have a vivid use of words that captures well the impact of Autumn. "Long fallen crisp leaves" is a line that draws the reader into your poem and appeals to the senses. The reader sees the leaves and feels the crunch of fallen leaves. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic flow of lines.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
