Mutated Virus
5/7/5 Halloween Horror Haiku contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Well done. This is very scary, the scariest scenario I could think of. It's a perfect poem for Halloween. You did a great job also with an animation and a picture.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Well done. This is very scary, the scariest scenario I could think of. It's a perfect poem for Halloween. You did a great job also with an animation and a picture.
Well done.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Cheers,
Gypsy
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Halloween Horror Haiku poem speaks sometimes changes bring in disaster as the poet imagines the mutated virus may turn us to be flesh-eating zombies; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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This Halloween Horror Haiku poem speaks sometimes changes bring in disaster as the poet imagines the mutated virus may turn us to be flesh-eating zombies; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from equestrik
I am not a horror aficionado but this is well written and well presented with a well chosen illustration to make the point of your writing. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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I am not a horror aficionado but this is well written and well presented with a well chosen illustration to make the point of your writing. Nicely done.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Appropriately ghoulish. If this happens people will be more scared at the prospect of being eaten by one of their fellows that of catching Corona! Cheers and chills! LIZ
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Appropriately ghoulish. If this happens people will be more scared at the prospect of being eaten by one of their fellows that of catching Corona! Cheers and chills! LIZ
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from robyn corum
M.,
Oh. I am sad. When I saw this contest the other day - I knew instinctively that you had created it, and I felt a pang of sadness. It is still so hard for me to believe that he's gone. I know he would have loved this contest -- although he also probably would have swept up all the prizes, too. haha
This poem of yours is certainly on-pointe. *smile* Yeah, yeah, you COULD be talking about zombies who sneak up on us and attack... or it could be a metaphor for this fabulous state we are all currently living in. Blah. And Bleck. And uuueeeewwww, yuck!
*smile*
THANK YOU for creating this contest. I'm sorry I was too late to enter. Silly me. (Of course, you know I'm not fab at writing these. It's a curse.) But I would have joined in just in memory. --sigh--
Unfortunately, by the time I remembered, I'd already posted two things.
Thank you and good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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M.,
Oh. I am sad. When I saw this contest the other day - I knew instinctively that you had created it, and I felt a pang of sadness. It is still so hard for me to believe that he's gone. I know he would have loved this contest -- although he also probably would have swept up all the prizes, too. haha
This poem of yours is certainly on-pointe. *smile* Yeah, yeah, you COULD be talking about zombies who sneak up on us and attack... or it could be a metaphor for this fabulous state we are all currently living in. Blah. And Bleck. And uuueeeewwww, yuck!
*smile*
THANK YOU for creating this contest. I'm sorry I was too late to enter. Silly me. (Of course, you know I'm not fab at writing these. It's a curse.) But I would have joined in just in memory. --sigh--
Unfortunately, by the time I remembered, I'd already posted two things.
Thank you and good luck!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Robyn. You're very kind.
Comment from karenina
God Bless our own sweet Dean! He had a kind heart and deep faith and yet many who did not dig deeper into his portfolio would have thought it was all horror all the time. You made me smile to remember him and dedicate this to him. May your poem NEVER come true!--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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God Bless our own sweet Dean! He had a kind heart and deep faith and yet many who did not dig deeper into his portfolio would have thought it was all horror all the time. You made me smile to remember him and dedicate this to him. May your poem NEVER come true!--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Karenina. Have a wonderful weekend. :)
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You too! (It's going to be a stormy one here...I've got a couple of good books at the ready!)---Karenina
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Hello Gypsy,
This is a great entry for the hallowe'en horror contest. Gory and horrible. In addition it's timely, as we have no idea where Covid is going to take us next. Good luck in the contest.
Katherine
PS no dash between line 2 and 3 (see author's note).
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Hello Gypsy,
This is a great entry for the hallowe'en horror contest. Gory and horrible. In addition it's timely, as we have no idea where Covid is going to take us next. Good luck in the contest.
Katherine
PS no dash between line 2 and 3 (see author's note).
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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I changed the poem, in case you would like to check it out.
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so in answer to your changes, I re-wrote my review
Comment from Gloria ....
Ohhhh, that is a skeery one, that Dean would've appreciated greatly. If Covid mutates and turns people into hungry, hungry zombies.
Wishing you much luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Ohhhh, that is a skeery one, that Dean would've appreciated greatly. If Covid mutates and turns people into hungry, hungry zombies.
Wishing you much luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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I changed the poem, in case you would like to check it out.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Gypsy
Oh yes you definitely have a halloween horror haiku about
covid19 that mutated to make patients cannibals.
is so frighting to even think about.
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Hello Gypsy
Oh yes you definitely have a halloween horror haiku about
covid19 that mutated to make patients cannibals.
is so frighting to even think about.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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You are welcome Gypsy
thank you for your nice thoughts.
Gert
Comment from Joan E.
Yes, your 5-7-5 haiku is sufficiently scary for Halloween. The possibility of "famished cannibals" is unthinkable, but Dean would have appreciated it! Best wishes in the Halloween Horror contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Yes, your 5-7-5 haiku is sufficiently scary for Halloween. The possibility of "famished cannibals" is unthinkable, but Dean would have appreciated it! Best wishes in the Halloween Horror contest- Joan
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Joan, for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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I changed the poem, in case you would like to check it out.
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I think this version flows better and "flesh-eating" is more dramatic. Well done- Joan
