Sequestered
Never forget that life is a continuum...48 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Congrats on the win Yvette for the 20 word poem
As you say it is one that makes you think and you show us the positive, nicely done. Cheers valda
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Congrats on the win Yvette for the 20 word poem
As you say it is one that makes you think and you show us the positive, nicely done. Cheers valda
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Valda!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the congrats, my lady, and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, congrats and sorry I missed the vote. Lately, I have been more out than inš???Thank you for sharing and stay safe my Friend, winter is here physically and spiritually.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Wow, congrats and sorry I missed the vote. Lately, I have been more out than inš???Thank you for sharing and stay safe my Friend, winter is here physically and spiritually.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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S'okay to enjoy life outside of here, my lady (wink, wink) -- just glad to here from you when your inside!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful final week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Congratulations on a very thoughtful poem. There is so much meaning here it will keep me going for a while. You managed to write something that peaks our curiosity as to just how exactly you came to these four lines and what exactly do they mean to you. They mean a lot to me.
Ralf
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Congratulations on a very thoughtful poem. There is so much meaning here it will keep me going for a while. You managed to write something that peaks our curiosity as to just how exactly you came to these four lines and what exactly do they mean to you. They mean a lot to me.
Ralf
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Ralf - what wonderful comments topped off with those lovely stars!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful weekend of inviting October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Congratulations Yvette! A very deserving 1st place win.
All the colors in the artwork, blending into your words is beautiful.
The words took my thoughts to heaven and eternal life with God. However, it seemed to be unreachable, perhaps because of one's intellectual adult mind; not like it once was ... easy to grasp like a child's belief in things invisible.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Congratulations Yvette! A very deserving 1st place win.
All the colors in the artwork, blending into your words is beautiful.
The words took my thoughts to heaven and eternal life with God. However, it seemed to be unreachable, perhaps because of one's intellectual adult mind; not like it once was ... easy to grasp like a child's belief in things invisible.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Gale!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
P.S. So good to 'hear' from you again -- welcome back, my lady! ;) :)
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You're something else :) I look forward to reading your works again.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvette,
It seems these twenty words talk about the future and the past and not about the present. Unless the present is assumed to be the point you are having these thoughts. The present can be created by both memory and hope of the future.
Congrats on the win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Yvette,
It seems these twenty words talk about the future and the past and not about the present. Unless the present is assumed to be the point you are having these thoughts. The present can be created by both memory and hope of the future.
Congrats on the win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Joan!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
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You are most kindly welcome, Yvette.
Joan
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wistful and whimsical--forever's key hiding in childhood's rainbow--lovely flow--fine imagery and metaphor--elegant presentation. Congrats on your win! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Wistful and whimsical--forever's key hiding in childhood's rainbow--lovely flow--fine imagery and metaphor--elegant presentation. Congrats on your win! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, LIZ!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from sammielwf
Y.M.
With such a small trove of words to use to build a vivid image/meaning...you have outdone yourself. I really enjoyed the vision of chashing eternity but it being just out of reach....
Beyond the rainbow if childhood memories.
Well done. I liked this a great deal.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Y.M.
With such a small trove of words to use to build a vivid image/meaning...you have outdone yourself. I really enjoyed the vision of chashing eternity but it being just out of reach....
Beyond the rainbow if childhood memories.
Well done. I liked this a great deal.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, Sammie, for this awesome review and those shining stars -- both are so very appreciated!! ;) It is warming to here that you appreciated this one in the manner in which the poet's pen wrote it!! ;) Be sure to stop by this way again some time and take good care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Congratulations Yvette - I can see why you won the contest. Very well written and your display, a usual, is beautifully colourful - regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Congratulations Yvette - I can see why you won the contest. Very well written and your display, a usual, is beautifully colourful - regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Dorothy -- always great to hear from you over here, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from w.j.debi
I can see why you won this contest. I love the lyrical rhythm of the words. As always, the formating is gorgeous. You do that so well. The combination of your writing and the artwork is wonderful
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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I can see why you won this contest. I love the lyrical rhythm of the words. As always, the formating is gorgeous. You do that so well. The combination of your writing and the artwork is wonderful
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Oh, I'm so glad to see you, my friend! Thanx for the review on this shortie, my lady - you know, twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... have a wonderful weekend ahead filled with lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanx to the Committee for this 'starshine' this morning - what a wonderful start to the remainder of the week (and the month - lol!)! ;) ;) May you all find lots of starshine to brighten your October Skies!! ;) Yvette
