Sequestered
Never forget that life is a continuum...48 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Yes, the elusive pot of gold hides from most of us. But the search for it is always available regardless of age.
Do like your artwork and text color scheme. Both add to the overall presentation for this contest entry.
Mark
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Yvette,
Yes, the elusive pot of gold hides from most of us. But the search for it is always available regardless of age.
Do like your artwork and text color scheme. Both add to the overall presentation for this contest entry.
Mark
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Mark -- always good to hear from you! ;) Have a great rest of the week and take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome writing. I like this in searching for forevers key. ''Twas eternity I spied. Alas it lingered out of reach where distant childhood rainbows hide. Very beautiful imagery and your choice of colours for your background and font really stand out. Very well done.
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Awesome writing. I like this in searching for forevers key. ''Twas eternity I spied. Alas it lingered out of reach where distant childhood rainbows hide. Very beautiful imagery and your choice of colours for your background and font really stand out. Very well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Oh, wow, Joanne - such a wonderful review, my lady, and those stars are just lovely!! ;) :) Ya know, twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx so much for the review and be sure to stop by again sometime! ;) :) Have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janetsue
This is both an emotional and an intellectual entry in the 20 Word Poem contest. I like the owl in the picture representing wisdom. We all have childhood memories, and also memories about forks in the roads of later life. People are blessed when they view Eternity as being a place of joy and satisfaction without any concerns about what right and wrong roads we traveled during our time on Earth. Best wishes, Yvette!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This is both an emotional and an intellectual entry in the 20 Word Poem contest. I like the owl in the picture representing wisdom. We all have childhood memories, and also memories about forks in the roads of later life. People are blessed when they view Eternity as being a place of joy and satisfaction without any concerns about what right and wrong roads we traveled during our time on Earth. Best wishes, Yvette!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Janet -- think I was just 'feeling it' with this one (wink, wink)!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I really liked this poem; its wording and meaning.
It meets the 20-word criteria.
The artwork is very nice too.
The last line gave me pause, however. Because there are so many words, the beat is off. I know in this kind of poem you aren't required to count syllables. But when I read poems, I say them out loud and when the beat is off, it diminishes the work to my mind. That is only my opinon perhaps. Hence 4 stars from me.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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I really liked this poem; its wording and meaning.
It meets the 20-word criteria.
The artwork is very nice too.
The last line gave me pause, however. Because there are so many words, the beat is off. I know in this kind of poem you aren't required to count syllables. But when I read poems, I say them out loud and when the beat is off, it diminishes the work to my mind. That is only my opinon perhaps. Hence 4 stars from me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
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Comment from Sugarray77
Very philosophical and deep Yvette. Great job, as always, on presentation, content and a meaningful poem. I wish you luck in this endeavor and know you will do great.
Melissa
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Very philosophical and deep Yvette. Great job, as always, on presentation, content and a meaningful poem. I wish you luck in this endeavor and know you will do great.
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Melissa!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, interesting and creative. I pondered
on my childhood memories as I thought about it's beauty. The artwork is perfect as it colors the world of eternity with bliss.
Have a great weekend, Yvette!
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The author's words are engaging, interesting and creative. I pondered
on my childhood memories as I thought about it's beauty. The artwork is perfect as it colors the world of eternity with bliss.
Have a great weekend, Yvette!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Maria!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Stephen Force
Strong poem, sometimes when looking back at life it feels that our childhood, our youth, and our yesterday's were a different life altogether. We are after all works in progress. As always your verse and its presentation are excellent. Good luck with the contest.
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Strong poem, sometimes when looking back at life it feels that our childhood, our youth, and our yesterday's were a different life altogether. We are after all works in progress. As always your verse and its presentation are excellent. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Steve!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Boogienights
Interesting, it makes you think a bit. I'm not quite ready for eternity yet, but when I am I hope it's not out of reach. I like poems that makes me stop and think on foe awhile. Goid luck in the contest.
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Interesting, it makes you think a bit. I'm not quite ready for eternity yet, but when I am I hope it's not out of reach. I like poems that makes me stop and think on foe awhile. Goid luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Boogie!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
You have captured the essence of a search for the meaning of eternity. Unfortunately, some are unconvinced and prefer the fate of annihilationism.
Good luck in the contest.
Z :-()
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Hello Yvette.
You have captured the essence of a search for the meaning of eternity. Unfortunately, some are unconvinced and prefer the fate of annihilationism.
Good luck in the contest.
Z :-()
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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LOL - like that one: annihilationism!! ;) :) May have to use that sometimes! ;) Thanx for stopping in on this shortie, sir -- and you have a wonderful rest of the week out there! ;)
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Hey Yvette. I have a piece of writing where I use that word and entropy in the same story. HAHAHA
Z
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Beautiful poem entry for the 20 Word Poem contest. The presentation is outstanding...love the blue rose! It's wonderful to believe in eternal souls, we go on after death. The spirit and souls never die. Well done.
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Sequestered
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Beautiful poem entry for the 20 Word Poem contest. The presentation is outstanding...love the blue rose! It's wonderful to believe in eternal souls, we go on after death. The spirit and souls never die. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Gypsy!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
